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I'll review everyones stories but it might take a few days seeing as i'm starting school back up tomorrow

BookWhisperer no problem hon, take your time School comes first Just @ me whenever you can.

BookWhisperer Sara is right. Just take your time. Wishing you a happy new month and a great day at school

Okay thanks guys for understanding

Vam_V Okay I reviewed your book on my blog

BookWhisperer
Thanks, I will take look at the review.

Is there a problem if I comment asking for some details about your opinion of the story in your blog review?

Vam_V no not at all. go ahead and ill respond when I see it

BookWhisperer if you have the time, please review my novel below. Currently, it has a contract and regularly updated.

Title: Herbs & Lotions – The Busy Life of Alfraed Logick

Genre: Fantasy

Synopsis:
In a world where magic lives and mysterious civilization found, Alfraed Logick opens “Herbs & Lotions”, a shop selling various medicine, potion, and lotion.

Under guidance of a mysterious master, the young man becomes an adept healer who possesses abnormal strength and stamina, fluency in ancient language, and willingness to go the extra mile. With these abilities he promises to make the shop the best in the world, and live the lifestyle of his dream.

In his endeavor to promote his products to the world and earn extra income, he will unexpectedly have encounters with heroes, kings, elder dragons, demon lords, demigods, and many more, some become trusted friends, some bitter enemies, and one of them is the love of his life.

This is the story of Alfraed Logick's busy life.

Release rate: at least two chapter per week

Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/herbs-lotions---the-busy-life-of-alfraed-logick_18990230506003205

PWS Yeah of course i'll review it. Like i said to others, i'm starting school soon and will prob need like a week or so to get to it because others have asked me to first.

Vam_V Yeah by blurb I mean synopsis. Google Seat h blurb in you fond grenar articles om how to write one. i think there was a guide Eon blurb writing somewhere in this forum.

By text dumping , I mean you got way too much text and there isnt that much space. Also you probably could make the text shorter .

Magsman
Yeah, the synopsis was pretty bad, I remade it now.

Also, on the text dumping front, it was a problem with webnovel basically, the site ignores the spacing and just presses the text together, making that mush of text that you saw.

I fixed it by putting a " . " in literally every spacing so now the site can't just ignore it.

I'll bite.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/transition-and-restart_12652502605368205

Title: Transition and Restart

Genre: High School Romance (New Adult rather than Young Adult despite the setting)

Blurb:
If you were transported from this world to another almost identical.
If you were transported from your life to your teenage self.
If you had to restart your life again.
Would you, or would you cling to your memories?

I visited your blog and it's really interesting and good. It will help a lot of newcomers

I will be really happy if you review and read my work. It may not be in your taste but I am waiting for your honest review.

Webnovel

The Day I Saw A God
Novel - Fantasy Romance

https://m.webnovel.com/book/the-day-i-saw-a-god_17907694705493305

Synopsis
Humans are born in this world for a reason. They live searching for the reason why they are still alive. One may live for protect his love ones. Some lives to become a king or queen. Some are born poor trying to live their life however they can to survive clinging on the hope that there life will change. Some are born for disturbing the peace of the world. Some live to find peace that they have lost. Some may find there reason to live in there lifetime and some may can't find it even if they searched it in there entire lifetime but everyone have a promised day. A day that was promised by the god. This day wasn't only promised to humans but for every living being in the entire world. Humans, animals, fishes and birds they all are aware of it. The day when there life come to an end .That day was known to all living being by the mother nature .That is Death .Every living being will die one day. That is the promised day.

This story is about a girl. Her name is Natsumi Furakawa. She is in a High School Girl. She lived in Tokyo Japan. She had A Normal Life. Though she was the Japan's most Richest Architecture's daughter. Suddenly One Day She Meet With Someone Who Told Her That She Is Going Die Today.
What Will Happen To The Girl?
What Will she do?
Read the story to know about what happened to her and all the other people that she will meet and she had meet will have there promised day. The day they die.

Fahim_ahmed sounds cool. i'll get to it after i read others.

BookWhisperer super cool

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Hi, I'm not sure what type of novels you're looking for, but if this fits your interests, please do check it out!
[all forms of constructive criticism accepted ]

Title: An Undying Love Story
Genre: Thriller Romance [but in the 70s]
Status: Ongoing [new chapters out every day] <i try>

Synopsis: Lena, now in an old age home, recollects her short yet lovely romance in her teenage years, through a diary she wishes to publish. Albeit her love life flourishing, it brings along with it, some problems that negatively affect her dear ones, and at some point, her too. Laugh and cry with her, as she walks down memory lane, nostalgia accompanying her in the last moments of her life.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/an-undying-love-story_20917543105020205

Hi, Try this one - https://www.webnovel.com/book/i-engraved-you-in-me_20715452106255005
Genre - lgbt+
Status - Ongoing
Theme - Transmigration / Reincarnation