BookWhisperer

Hi, I visited your blog and really love the idea, bookmarked it for future posts.
If it's not much of a bother, it would be great if you can review my novel and post about it. Thank you.

Name: The Midnight Crime
Genre: Fantasy
Synopsis: When he broke into the mansion that moonlit night, Falcon should have known he had taken a little too much of a risk, even for himself. When his life takes a tumble, he sets out to correct it again, unknowingly entangling in the enigma of a forgotten artifact along with the artist and the wild girl.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-midnight-crime_20640198305268305

It's okay if it doesn't suit your taste. And if it does, I would love an honest review of it.

      BookWhisperer

      One piece of advice, when asking for recommendations, especially in a place like this, you should detail your interests and preferences in a story. Otherwise, you will get recommended a lot of random garbage that will not fit your interests.

      And since we're talking about random garbage, I will recommend my story!

      If you're looking for things to read, you can technically read my story too. Since it is, in fact, written.

      In Z Finite

      Synopsis: A story about a young guy, who goes on an adventure in search of some magic stones and finds himself adrift in the dangerous events of the world around him.

      Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/in-z-finite_20896434106083105

      Genre: Action, Adventure, Comedy, Fantasy

      If you had at least a chuckle reading this reply then you will probably enjoy the story.

          Vam_V Your blurb needs more work. This is short which is good but is a bit too general . No eye catching and wont bait readers.

          The story has nice flow but is too much text dumping , making it hard to read.

              Magsman
              Wow, someone actually read it, I am very surprised. Thank you very much for your input.

              Just two things:

              • 1 - By blurb you mean the synopsis? If the answer is yes, then yeah, it is pretty bad. But I don't really know what to put in there...

              • 2 - Could you tell me more about the text dumping thing? I am not familiar with this expression so I don't really get what you meant by it, and I want to understand it so I can improve my work.

              Also, sorry for deviating a little from the forum topic here.

                  Jia_K Omg love the synopsis. I will read and review it, but it might take a couple days seeing as my school starts on thursday and I will be very busy. I love that you liked my blog. Thanks!

                      Vam_V I'll read your story too! And in the future I will put what I am looking for in a book. I'm just starting on this app and still getting the hang of it. Thanks for all of the helpful comments.

                        BookWhisperer

                        Thanks for seeing the post and finding time for the review. Please do it at your own pace. Your blog's great!

                          https://www.webnovel.com/book/in-a-world-with-magic-rielen%E2%80%99s-story_15841779406220805

                          Name: In a World With Magic: Rielen's Story
                          Genre: Fantasy/Romance
                          Synopsis: Rielen is chosen as a magic user in the Kingdom of Autra. This means being taken from the one she loves and her family to the Royal Capital. What will become of Rielen and what does it mean to be selected? Join Rielen on her journey as a new mage in the Kingdom of Autra.

                          This is the story I have chosen daily updates for. Please give me an honest review if this fits within the genres you read! : )

                          Please review mine as well

                          https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/17707119706580305?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4313215511
                          Name: The Elusive Book Keeper
                          Genre: Urban Fantasy
                          Synopsis; The creature chuckled, his voice echoing within the empty walls.

                          "What do you wish for? Youth, Immortality, Wealth, Power? You can be the one above all, I can make you Heaven's favoured child."
                          His voice was bewitching, tempting one to the depths of hell..........

                          Zane looked up, his eyes spoke of deep and suffocating emotions, "I will rather the heavens forget me instead."

                          https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/17707119706580305?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4313215511

                          BookWhisperer I’d like to offer up my work for your perusal and critique. I looked up your blog, and I think I’ll have to check out A Court of Thorns and Roses, at your suggestion.

                          Since you like Romance Fantasy books, I think you’ll find my series quite interesting. It has Devoted Love, Magic, Battles, Fae of All Kinds, Comedy, Intrigue, and a cheeky Dragon in later chapters that is a favorite amongst my readers. The first 79 chapters are free to read if you’re interested, and thank you regardless.
                          ☮️❤️😁

                          https://m.webnovel.com/book/17626083906011405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4313201538

                            BookWhisperer
                            Thanks, I will take look at the review.

                            Is there a problem if I comment asking for some details about your opinion of the story in your blog review?

                                BookWhisperer if you have the time, please review my novel below. Currently, it has a contract and regularly updated.

                                Title: Herbs & Lotions – The Busy Life of Alfraed Logick

                                Genre: Fantasy

                                Synopsis:
                                In a world where magic lives and mysterious civilization found, Alfraed Logick opens “Herbs & Lotions”, a shop selling various medicine, potion, and lotion.

                                Under guidance of a mysterious master, the young man becomes an adept healer who possesses abnormal strength and stamina, fluency in ancient language, and willingness to go the extra mile. With these abilities he promises to make the shop the best in the world, and live the lifestyle of his dream.

                                In his endeavor to promote his products to the world and earn extra income, he will unexpectedly have encounters with heroes, kings, elder dragons, demon lords, demigods, and many more, some become trusted friends, some bitter enemies, and one of them is the love of his life.

                                This is the story of Alfraed Logick's busy life.

                                Release rate: at least two chapter per week

                                Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/herbs-lotions---the-busy-life-of-alfraed-logick_18990230506003205

                                    PWS Yeah of course i'll review it. Like i said to others, i'm starting school soon and will prob need like a week or so to get to it because others have asked me to first.

                                        Title:‌ ‌Falling‌ ‌Stardust‌ ‌
                                        Vol‌ ‌title:‌ ‌Estia's‌ ‌revenge‌ ‌
                                        Link:‌ ‌‌https://www.webnovel.com/book/falling-stardust-estia's-embrace_20953821806532805‌ ‌
                                        Genre:‌ ‌Action|‌ ‌adventure|fantasy|romance|‌ ‌
                                        Synopsis:‌ ‌Having‌ ‌broken‌ ‌through‌ ‌to‌ ‌a‌ ‌much‌ ‌wider‌ ‌world,‌ ‌achieving‌ ‌his‌ ‌dream‌ ‌seems‌ ‌even‌ ‌more‌ ‌
                                        impossible.‌ ‌Xasha‌ ‌fearlessly‌ ‌charges‌ ‌into‌ ‌a‌ ‌continent‌ ‌full‌ ‌of‌ ‌powerful‌ ‌and‌ ‌ruthless‌ ‌races‌ ‌to‌ ‌carve‌ ‌out‌ ‌
                                        a‌ ‌place‌ ‌for‌ ‌the‌ ‌human‌ ‌race‌ ‌to‌ ‌thrive‌ ‌after‌ ‌millions‌ ‌of‌ ‌years‌ ‌of‌ ‌suffering‌ ‌in‌ ‌the‌ ‌abandoned‌ ‌region.‌ ‌
                                        Author's‌ ‌comments.‌ ‌"At‌ ‌the‌ ‌root‌ ‌of‌ ‌it,‌ ‌Falling‌ ‌Stardust‌ ‌is‌ ‌about‌ ‌overcoming‌ ‌hardships,‌ ‌learning‌ ‌from‌ ‌
                                        mistakes,‌ ‌having‌ ‌trust‌ ‌in‌ ‌those‌ ‌around‌ ‌you,‌ ‌and‌ ‌finding‌ ‌one's‌ ‌place‌ ‌in‌ ‌this‌ ‌world.‌ ‌It‌ ‌is‌ ‌a‌ ‌
                                        coming-of-age‌ ‌story‌ ‌but‌ ‌also‌ ‌a‌ ‌one-man‌ ‌against‌ ‌the‌ ‌world‌ ‌story‌ ‌that‌ ‌will‌ ‌have‌ ‌you‌ ‌on‌ ‌the‌ ‌edge‌ ‌of‌ ‌
                                        your‌ ‌seats.‌ ‌Don't‌ ‌believe‌ ‌me?‌ ‌Try‌ ‌it‌ ‌and‌ ‌see."‌ ‌

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