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Thank you for the stone, I'm done with your review!
One advice from your older sis, when you review your novel (and surely you'll review it many times), try to pick a tense and unify the whole novel with it.
e.g.
(Don't do this): She walks out of the door, she went to the party.
(Do this): She walks out of the door then goes to the party.
(Or this): She walked out of the door and went to the party.
I'm not a native speaker so please don't think I'm flexing -not that native speaker flex LOL- I can't make everyone happy here. Just a friendly advice, take it or leave it.

    @Dinessu
    Hey, thanks for replying, not looking for a review at this point, I want power stones! If you're interested please send a stone my way, it's fine if it's from another account just let me know it's you and you'll receive a review right after!

      ZeroX0666 Hello, done reviewing. Liked your novel. Judging by the number of chapters, it seems that you have published it recently. Also, Could you please hand me some pointers on how to write good novels?

          MishalZamir Of course! Let me start reading yours. I will drop a review as soon as you do mine ☺️

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