MerrySweet Ah this book right here. Firstly I hate all the characters but I love the novel. I hate all the characters because they are sooo human and well written. The aspects I've seen within my own life bring so much potency to each character. I can appreciate the novel for what it is. Female lead shitting on a guy that did her wrong, but I like that Cynthia's actions don't paint her as a hero. I saw someone say they would want 1st person perspective but I think you made an excellent choice with 3rd because you really get to simply see the actions and allow your own moral compass to lead you into what your seeing. I do wonder if this story needs all those chapters as in my personal preference that makes it a little intimidating to read (not really a fan of webnovel length prefer traditional novel length). There are a few typos here and there that could be cleaned up with a simple grammarly scrub to polish it off but other than that I can't complain about the actual novel. Great story I really love it glad I could read it.

Here's my novel https://www.webnovel.com/book/a-brother's-strength_24947605205370305

                                                              Grandmasters I have to ask do you want me to leave an honest review? Or just a positive one? Because if I leave an honest one it'll be filled with criticism. I only ask because most of your reviews are very positive, and I don't want to leave you with something you don't really want to see or like.

                                                                  Hello. I'm recommending my book "They Become One". Please check it out and leave a review. Thanks.
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                                                                  Synopsis:
                                                                  If you had not come into my life, what would living have looked like?"
                                                                  Pei Yueran is a 33-year old career woman juggling her work, family and being the sole parent of her son. After a terrible incident upends her life, she moves to another city and tries to pick the pieces of her life up again.
                                                                  Love had been elusive for so long for Li Chuanmo. At first glance, he had everything - the looks, wealth and success, but he alone knows how empty and abandoned he feels inside, despite being surrounded by friends and family.
                                                                  Love is finally coming for him, but when will he notice? Will these two unlikely souls recognize Cupid if it hits them square in the face? They sure have a chance, but their choices will determine everything.
                                                                  PS: Although the ML is running low on EQ, he has a capable assistant -
                                                                  His son.

                                                                    @McWms99 Thank you for the phenomenal double review here and there. The moral of the story is simply not to go down the revenge road, hope my readers don't stone me for it when they finally get there LOL. The extra extras are there to make it lengthy, your note was spot on. And no amount of Grammarly which I already use can change the fact that English is not my mother tongue but my fourth language, yikes! Hope it's not a turn-off!
                                                                    I'll be burning the midnight oil with your book, looking forward to it 🙂 Thanks again!

                                                                      Apologies to the rest of you guys who asked for a review swap, I won't be doing that for a while because I got both of my ongoing novels rated, best of luck to everyone around here <3
                                                                      Over and out!

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