MerrySweet I love this. Thank you so much. I really appreciate it. Now, replying to the thing about the first chapter, that entire first chapter is a prologue, that details the life of a character different, but the same as the main character. the story isn't about him. That isn't where the story starts. If you can stick around, you will see how the story progresses. Just treat it not as an info dump, but as a short story, sort of like the story they tell before you begin playing the God of War video games. It's to tell of the foreshadowing events that cause, directly, or indirectly, the beginning of all the exciting events in the book. Once again, thank you very much 🥰❤️.

    MerrySweet I'll just say this. I love your writing style, and I say this with all my heart. I'm not a fan of female lead books because, like you said, they are cringe as fuck. However, your book made me keep reading until about chapter 4 or 5. It was really that good. The only reason I stopped, was because of the scene where she met her childhood friend in a bar. I didn't enjoy that at all. I think that scene ruined the book for me, but it's not that there's anything wrong with it, it's just my preference when it comes to the content of a book. I hate it that guy George. He's a simp... 😤. I also hate when the female lead has already been ran through before she gets married. Like I said, fans of this genre will definitely might like it, but it's just not for me. Other than that, the book is so we'll written, and has little to no flaws grammatically. Keep up the good work. Also thanks for dropping the link. I really appreciate it 😚

        MerrySweet Also, I'm not writing just as a hobby. I plan on getting contracted. Do you think the book isn't good enough? 🥲

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