September 2021- Review Swap here!

BrightBrain256

Violet_Eve I can't add my review.
The system just keeps saying" This book has reached it's review limit"

I am just...... It's kind of irritating you know

Grandmasters

daylightmoon123445 WeAreInsolent MerrySweet daylightmoon123445 Uniasha Su_Jeong Blissful_ChaotiC review swap?
https://m.webnovel.com/book/vrmmorpg-i-can-use-all-job-class_24862363605047205

RomanceFanatic028 Para23 Nostalgia_cat Moonwriting MerrySweet Escape_Sequence McWms99 Hydra_Gairum Violet_Eve BrightBrain256 Hydra_Gairum Violet_Eve BrightBrain256 MerrySweet Violet_Eve angel_ododo Blissful_ChaotiC GMSJakers
McWms99

Hydra_Gairum

MerrySweet

Blissful_ChaotiC I stand by my review over there, three things here that I wanted to bring to your attention.
-I was slightly confused with ((((....sth sth....)))) until I figured out that it was the Reaper talking. Still not sure whether it's out loud or inwardly. Had to skip so much because of your exceptional way of describing images with words, it was way too bloody for me. (ML readers will love it). Long story short, you might want to use the Creators' thought's part to explain it to readers.
-It's personal preference, but so many other authors use two stars to express noise. * BOOM! * for me looks much more attractive than BOOM. But it's up to you of course.
-Once again, it's personal, but I didn't like the way each chapter ended with the word End. Shouldn't that come in the very end? You want your readers to keep scrolling down for more and the word End seems to be asking for the exact opposite.
Hope it gets contracted, hope you update 2 chapters a day because WN readers have that kind of expectation. And all the best in the world to you! Loved the cover btw!

Violet_Eve

MerrySweet Let's review swap.

GMSJakers

Blissful_ChaotiC

MerrySweet

Thank you so much!! Yes, you have a good point regarding using the creators' thought's to explain some stylistic choices that may be confusing.

Regarding 'End', you made another good point there. I suppose I had a bad habit of thinking of each chapter as it's own thing so I kept putting End as I was finishing it haha. I can remove those 🙂

Thanks again! I'm working on your, and everyone elses, review now!

McWms99

MerrySweet Ah this book right here. Firstly I hate all the characters but I love the novel. I hate all the characters because they are sooo human and well written. The aspects I've seen within my own life bring so much potency to each character. I can appreciate the novel for what it is. Female lead shitting on a guy that did her wrong, but I like that Cynthia's actions don't paint her as a hero. I saw someone say they would want 1st person perspective but I think you made an excellent choice with 3rd because you really get to simply see the actions and allow your own moral compass to lead you into what your seeing. I do wonder if this story needs all those chapters as in my personal preference that makes it a little intimidating to read (not really a fan of webnovel length prefer traditional novel length). There are a few typos here and there that could be cleaned up with a simple grammarly scrub to polish it off but other than that I can't complain about the actual novel. Great story I really love it glad I could read it.

Here's my novel https://www.webnovel.com/book/a-brother's-strength_24947605205370305

Blissful_ChaotiC

GMSJakers

For sure! I'll do my best to get to it tonight, but if I don't it'll be done by end of day tomorrow.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/where-the-world-ends_24022968405310005

Blissful_ChaotiC

Left a review! Here's a link to mine:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/where-the-world-ends_24022968405310005

Blissful_ChaotiC

Hydra_Gairum

Done!

angel_ododo

MerrySweet Sure. My story is "healing an illness" by angel_ododo

angel_ododo

SaberKey Sure. I am up for it. My story is "Healing An Illness by angel_ododo

Blissful_ChaotiC

Escape_Sequence

Left a review! Here's the link to mine:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/where-the-world-ends_24022968405310005

McWms99

Grandmasters yea sure here's my book https://www.webnovel.com/book/a-brother's-strength_24947605205370305

McWms99

Grandmasters I have to ask do you want me to leave an honest review? Or just a positive one? Because if I leave an honest one it'll be filled with criticism. I only ask because most of your reviews are very positive, and I don't want to leave you with something you don't really want to see or like.

Hydra_Gairum

Grandmasters Sure here's mine, pls let me know after you review mine

http://wbnv.in/a/fehPU7Q

_Rockbison_

Grandmasters hey l am interested...

https://m.webnovel.com/book/seducing-her-allof-ex.._25121184806197805
Here is my link..
Also let's add each other on the library

Blissful_ChaotiC

Grandmasters

Sure! I'll have it reviewed by end of today. Here's the link to mine:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/where-the-world-ends_24022968405310005

Blissful_ChaotiC

Grandmasters

Left a review! Here's mine:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/where-the-world-ends_24022968405310005

Su_Jeong

Grandmasters Sure...let me know when you've done mine. I'll do yours now.

Su_Jeong

Grandmasters I have written an honest review.
Please read my work and drop a review/feedback as well. Thanks.

Hydra_Gairum

Grandmasters
Fine here's mine,
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/22351242705868805?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4316720296

Para23

Grandmasters Sure! Here's a link to mine:

Grandmasters

McWms99 both bad and good if you may.....but I like criticisms

Grandmasters

Hydra_Gairum
Bro link is broken....title please? Or your google link in your book

Hydra_Gairum

Grandmasters
Ok Title : The Reminiscence of life

daylightmoon123445

Blissful_ChaotiC Hi Kenji, I did yours, can you do mine as well?

Su_Jeong

Hello. I'm recommending my book "They Become One". Please check it out and leave a review. Thanks.
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/25183232905124005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=2548701932

Synopsis:
If you had not come into my life, what would living have looked like?"
Pei Yueran is a 33-year old career woman juggling her work, family and being the sole parent of her son. After a terrible incident upends her life, she moves to another city and tries to pick the pieces of her life up again.
Love had been elusive for so long for Li Chuanmo. At first glance, he had everything - the looks, wealth and success, but he alone knows how empty and abandoned he feels inside, despite being surrounded by friends and family.
Love is finally coming for him, but when will he notice? Will these two unlikely souls recognize Cupid if it hits them square in the face? They sure have a chance, but their choices will determine everything.
PS: Although the ML is running low on EQ, he has a capable assistant -
His son.

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