Violet_Eve I can't add my review.
The system just keeps saying" This book has reached it's review limit"

I am just...... It's kind of irritating you know

      Blissful_ChaotiC I stand by my review over there, three things here that I wanted to bring to your attention.
      -I was slightly confused with ((((....sth sth....)))) until I figured out that it was the Reaper talking. Still not sure whether it's out loud or inwardly. Had to skip so much because of your exceptional way of describing images with words, it was way too bloody for me. (ML readers will love it). Long story short, you might want to use the Creators' thought's part to explain it to readers.
      -It's personal preference, but so many other authors use two stars to express noise. * BOOM! * for me looks much more attractive than BOOM. But it's up to you of course.
      -Once again, it's personal, but I didn't like the way each chapter ended with the word End. Shouldn't that come in the very end? You want your readers to keep scrolling down for more and the word End seems to be asking for the exact opposite.
      Hope it gets contracted, hope you update 2 chapters a day because WN readers have that kind of expectation. And all the best in the world to you! Loved the cover btw!

          MerrySweet

          Thank you so much!! Yes, you have a good point regarding using the creators' thought's to explain some stylistic choices that may be confusing.

          Regarding 'End', you made another good point there. I suppose I had a bad habit of thinking of each chapter as it's own thing so I kept putting End as I was finishing it haha. I can remove those 🙂

          Thanks again! I'm working on your, and everyone elses, review now!

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