In Chapter 2: Liao Jie when will we get married?
you wrote "queit" instead of "quiet"
"tine" instead of "time"
"i" instead of "I"

Chapter 3:
'No you're majesty, this servant doesn't dare to voice an opinion as such.'
should be 'No, your Majesty. This . . . '

. . . as she walked our with her daughter . .
should be "walked out"

The men that -> The men who

A few of then couldn't help -> A few of them ...

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It's nicely written. I think it is more the opposite of my writing style.
I describe surroundings, things, looks and such. You describe emotions, feelings, and such.
But I don't like romance. That's also why I don't read the famous romance novels here like 100CEO or those.

    Yo i read those chapters, they are good. Mostly i read less Romance but i already hate the emperor :D

      turtleboiii well he seems like a collector of woman.

      And here i'm called a pervert while this guy is a really big ass :D i'll probably hate him more in the next chapter

          NineNeatherBird yeeessss thank you so much. Yea I'll prolly only post one a day anyways. I wanted to write three now but lost the file.

              I am so bored cz
              1 i can't be on discord now
              2 no one is mailing me 😭 my friend is already gone to bed. Smh timezones
              3 i want to write but can't unless I'll loose my inspiration

              I need help

                turtleboiii why cant you be on discord? Can't you discord app for either mobile or pc?
                Just gotta ask around, there would be a lot of people writing with you :D

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