Kana_Haisha where did you publish the review? I can't seem to find it in my book. Are you sure it's published?
Genuinely Constructive Review Swap
Sakura_Charmash It's published on your novel page. It's the most recent review and I had to scroll all the way to the bottom to see it, but it's there.
Sigheti I've finished my review and published it!
Mrtin_Monarch I'll begin work on yours.
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Kana_Haisha Great! I’m looking forward to reading it, but are you sure you published it? I haven’t received it. I currently have just the one review from sakuracarmash, and your pharagraph comment.
Sigheti Strange. Same thing happened when I reviewed Sakura_charmash's novel. I can see it when I go to the novel page, and there isn't a visibility option or anything, so it should be there.
Mrtin_Monarch I've finished and published my review!
Renee_Writes I'll work on yours soon, it may take a few days though.
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@Kana_Haisha that’s webnovel acting up probably. Would you mind uploading a screenshot here? (format guide is in the left corner) So that I can at least read your feedback
Mrtin_Monarch Will you do the review swap with me? Mine has 6 chapters only. Hope you post comments too.
Here's the link
https://m.webnovel.com/book/a-knight's-honour_24962791105409405
Renee_Writes Will you like to review mine? I will do the same.
Here's the link.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/a-knight's-honour_24962791105409405
Kana_Haisha Sure. Count me in.
Here the link.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/a-knight's-honour_24962791105409405
Let me know when you are done with honest review.
Sigheti sure, I went a little overboard with my plot analysis, but only because you left nothing else for me to critique. Goddamn you are a good writer, I'm actually jealous of your descriptive ability. Insane.
I'll just link the screenshots as not to spoil some of your plot here:
https://ibb.co/Bg31b3V
https://ibb.co/rvCB9dG
Kana_Haisha Will you do the review swap with me? I hope you give me honest feedbacks.
Here's the link.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/a-knight's-honour_24962791105409405
Sigheti Will you like to review mine? I'll do the same for you. And I hope the comments and reviews express your honest feelings.
Here's the link
https://m.webnovel.com/book/a-knight's-honour_24962791105409405
Sakura_Charmash wanna swap reviews and comments? Just hoping for genuine remarks.
Here's the link.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/a-knight's-honour_24962791105409405
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@Kana_Haisha thank you so much for the time and energy you put in this! I’ll take it with me as I continue writing (and rewriting) the story.
Also your take on them both being asshole’s: you’re absolutely right. I tried to walk the edge with it, and I’m afraid I overdid it. You’ve given me a lot to think about.
Also I’m screaming at the compliments. Thank you and have a great day
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Sigheti Will you give your honest review and comments to my story?
Here's the link
https://m.webnovel.com/book/a-knight's-honour_24962791105409405
Just let me know if you agree to it.
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@EveZenier
I'll review swap with you if you will have me. I'm doing a fan fiction, so it might be somewhat different from what you're used to. That said, it's high-octane action in an alternate universe with lots of mayhem and fun.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/phantom-of-the-air-nation-(avatar-au)_24876109006368005
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@EveZenier I dropped a nice, comprehensive review on your fiction. I hope it helps.
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@EveZenier I promised my honest opinion, and I delivered. I’m sorry if you’re disappointed, and I really hope you aren’t too discouraged after reading my review and my comments.
I’m looking forward to your feedback as well.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/three-cigarettes-in-an-ashtray-(gl)_22283531906595005
Sigheti No problem. I am more than happy that you shared your honest feelings. If you did not find my story to your liking, then I can just work hard to make it better so that you could like it. Besides, It was my first story and I didn't give it much thought. Just wrote it for fun. After my exams are over, I will surely work hard on improving my mistakes and making it more interesting than ever before.
EveZenier added yours to my library. Will review and comment within the day.
EveZenier Reviewed and tried to point out what I think needs improvement. All the very best for your writing.
I'm looking for chapter and paragraph comments and a collection swap if possible. Here is my link, when you feel inclined to return the favor. [https://m.webnovel.com/book/snow-n'-starlight_24482881305635405](https://)
Sakura_Charmash I have checked it out. So, let me be honest. I have my exams by the end of this month. So, I cannot read your book completely. Rather, I can try to read the first few chapters and write a review based on them. Hope you understand my point of view.
EveZenier Sure, that's fine. Good luck with your exams!
Sakura_Charmash Thanks.
Sakura_Charmash Done and dusted. I have added your book to my library and I'm sure I have learned a lot of things from your story especially about the world-building that you were describing. After my exams are over, I will give this story a thorough analysis to learn about how to write professionally.
EveZenier my goodness, I did not intend to promote mine as a world class example or anything. you are welcome to get as many pointers as you like and I truly wish you good luck with your craft. Thank you for taking time on mine.
I've reviewed 4 chapters of your novel. Here's mine if you had times to read.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/scorching-black-vulture_22073496706380905
RaedaX_1 I will benefit from a honest review. please can we do a review swap. Here is my link
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/23484503806062205?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4316402798
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Hello, if anyone wants to review swap with me. Then please leave behind a review after reading at least 5 chapters and add to your collections. I will do the same.
If you only want to collection swap that's fine as well.
I am also up for critical reviews as well.
Here are the links to my books-
https://www.webnovel.com/book/masquerade-of-madness_23187482205279605
https://www.webnovel.com/book/project-salvation-rise-of-the-venomous-snake_25054323106983905
Please guys, below is the link for my book. I promise to review yours if you review mine. Thank you
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/24997015106782805?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4323062248