ManwX Done with your review. It was an interesting start to a great story. I wish you luck in continuing to grow as a writer.

      ashk29 Done. Left a review, plenty of comments, and added it to my library. I liked most of your writing style and think you have some serious potential to develop amazing prose as you polish your writing.

          Alexialasthope Done with your review. You handle dialogue and worldbuilding really well it's all done in a natural way that immerses the reader in your story.

              rydertheking I have reviewed your story, thanks for reviewing mine. Your story has a really interesting concept with the parallel worlds.

                  goffyboy I reviewed your story and left a couple of comments I expect you to do the same for my story. You have a good foundation for your story that just needs to be polished.

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                      Slow_Neptune
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                      It's called The Reunion: a journey to Klin and back
                      I wrote a review for your story! It's so beautifully written and I enjoyed it so far šŸ˜ƒ
                      I posted a link to my story on my other account, I would be delighted to know your opinion on it. Thank you and happy writing šŸ™‚
                      Hope you like mine too

                          M_Ni I just wrote a review for your story and left a couple of comments. Thank you for your review. In the few chapters I read your writing improved between chapters at an impressive rate.

                              Slow_Neptune
                              Thank you very much šŸ˜ƒ It's my first time writing so it was a bumpy start šŸ™‚

                                  Slow_Neptune Thanks for the in-depth review. For giving me a lot of pointers. I am really thankful. Wish you the best of luck though min is just a hobby haha.

                                    Fauxflux You have a great ability to describe scenes as they play out. Your book was a joy to read and has been added to my collection. I left a review and several comments. I hope you do the same for me.

                                        Ink_Quanta Sure, I reading yours novel now, hope you too! 5 star review and a few honest comment would be appreciated. Thanks!

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                                          The last thing Scott McCall expected to see in his hotel room one night is a beautiful waitress. A woman so desperate for a job at his company that she would do anything to get his attentionā€¦like sneak into his hotel room to talk to him. Despite his growing attraction for this woman, Scott McCall throws logic out the door and hires her anyway.

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                                          An affair with the boss could ruin her, but what is life without risks?....

                                            Shamelessly promoting my story! If you were to read and leave a review, I would also take time to check out your story. šŸ™‚

                                            You may be brutally honest in your reviews.

                                            Here are the genres: Shoujo/Josei, Infrastructure, Romance, Apocalypse, Pregnancy, Game Elements, Adventure, Kingdom Building

                                            https://www.webnovel.com/book/altera-city-in-another-world_25926694405418805

                                            SUMMARY:
                                            Althea was one of the few surviving humans of Terran Star after a calamity that ended the galaxy. The strange force of the universe helped them immigrate to a strange new land, forcing them to create a home for themselves.

                                            The survivors were depressed. First they were forced to survive in a zombie apocalypse, and now they had to survive a new world altogether?

                                            It just so happened that Althea was one of the few people who got the Lord Token. Would she be able to build a good home for her children and fellowmen?

                                            Garan, after several brushes with death, finally found a clue to his wife. However, before he could hug her, he saw her hugging strange adorable children instead.

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