mahe_ale_aba I read your work. It has many grammatical error. No dialogue tags. Was it intentional? Alsi about the first chapter, the one that has webnovel link n all.. You should delete it

      mahe_ale_aba use grammarly, it will help you with punctuation and grammar. You can use its chrome extension or the app. It works fine for both laptop n phones plus it's free.

          mahe_ale_aba I can write a general review but wouldn't it be better if I write a detailed review after reading at least 3 chapters?
          What do you say?

              mahe_ale_aba

              I checked it, still 1 eps but the story is nice,
              Some points;
              First use grammerly, too many grammer mistakes and sentance structure is also not right.
              Second use " " when someone is talking ' ' for thoughts and also i noticed you didn't use punctuation that also not good! Its okh if it's hard cuz i m also not good at it, but to make less mistakes try to make your sentence Smaller like,

              [I was enjoying the comfort of my soft quilt, its warmth hugged my skin lightly. I was sleeping peacefully when Madam Beryl entered my room.

              "Good morning Your Highness." She said in her very cheerful voice.]

              That's it, I would have pinpoint more and reviewed but there was only one chp.
              Also,
              All the Best Keep it up. 💝

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