mahe_ale_aba I read your work. It has many grammatical error. No dialogue tags. Was it intentional? Alsi about the first chapter, the one that has webnovel link n all.. You should delete it

    mahe_ale_aba use grammarly, it will help you with punctuation and grammar. You can use its chrome extension or the app. It works fine for both laptop n phones plus it's free.

      mahe_ale_aba I can write a general review but wouldn't it be better if I write a detailed review after reading at least 3 chapters?
      What do you say?

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