hi i am a new writer i just wrote the first chapter of a book called rules and roses please can someone reviwe it thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuu
A NEW WRITER
mahe_ale_aba I've checked your book! Keep up the good work!
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QW_JiHi thank u so much do u have any suggestions to make it better ??
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mahe_ale_aba I suggest that you continue using the dialogue as a method to move the story forward, also make sure that your readers can understand difficult terms early on in the story.
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QW_JiHi okay thank u so much ill keep these things in mind
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mahe_ale_aba btw I've noticed that your book doesn't support Voting so you might wanna check up on that!
QW_JiHi oh what is voting ?
mahe_ale_aba Hey I m a new writer as well, would you be interested in swap reviews. If you do then pls add it to collection as well, I will do the same.
Thank you
https://m.webnovel.com/book/hanna's-warrior-queen-jwala_26298072906909005
theword_witch sure why not
mahe_ale_aba it has 2 chapters as of now, right?
I have added it to my library. I will leave a review next.
mahe_ale_aba I read your work. It has many grammatical error. No dialogue tags. Was it intentional? Alsi about the first chapter, the one that has webnovel link n all.. You should delete it
theword_witch okay thank u ill delete that one
mahe_ale_aba if you don't mind may I give a suggestion?
theword_witch yes pls i wont mind at all
can you review it again if u don't mind
mahe_ale_aba use grammarly, it will help you with punctuation and grammar. You can use its chrome extension or the app. It works fine for both laptop n phones plus it's free.
theword_witch oh allright thanks 
mahe_ale_aba I can write a general review but wouldn't it be better if I write a detailed review after reading at least 3 chapters?
What do you say?
theword_witch sure ill write a chapter tonight u can review it whenever u like it or after 4 or 5 chapters its up to u thanks tho it means alot but if u like u can review it generally
mahe_ale_aba Hello
I'm a new author and I hope we can swap reviews and comments. My novel is called A Vampire's Tale