theword_witch sure why not
A NEW WRITER
mahe_ale_aba it has 2 chapters as of now, right?
I have added it to my library. I will leave a review next.
mahe_ale_aba I read your work. It has many grammatical error. No dialogue tags. Was it intentional? Alsi about the first chapter, the one that has webnovel link n all.. You should delete it
theword_witch okay thank u ill delete that one
mahe_ale_aba if you don't mind may I give a suggestion?
theword_witch yes pls i wont mind at all
can you review it again if u don't mind
mahe_ale_aba use grammarly, it will help you with punctuation and grammar. You can use its chrome extension or the app. It works fine for both laptop n phones plus it's free.
theword_witch oh allright thanks 
mahe_ale_aba I can write a general review but wouldn't it be better if I write a detailed review after reading at least 3 chapters?
What do you say?
theword_witch sure ill write a chapter tonight u can review it whenever u like it or after 4 or 5 chapters its up to u thanks tho it means alot but if u like u can review it generally
mahe_ale_aba Hello
I'm a new author and I hope we can swap reviews and comments. My novel is called A Vampire's Tale
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chaoswalker_7 hey sure why not my book is called rules and roses
mahe_ale_aba Hope you don't mind the comment. It was my honest opinion.
chaoswalker_7 ohh i didnt see the comment let me check
chaoswalker_7 no noo i actually really appreciate it , it will help me get better
mahe_ale_aba Feel free to comment on my novel too
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Hi everyone, will someone review a book I wrote? It's called “This Deviant Lord is Bent”. I've just published 2 chapters and I'll really appreciate some constructive criticism from y'all kind souls. Thanks a bunch
Here's the link https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26416663305042405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4320321696
https://www.webnovel.com/book/destiny's-alter_26361859405879805
Check out mine too plz
I checked it, still 1 eps but the story is nice,
Some points;
First use grammerly, too many grammer mistakes and sentance structure is also not right.
Second use " " when someone is talking ' ' for thoughts and also i noticed you didn't use punctuation that also not good! Its okh if it's hard cuz i m also not good at it, but to make less mistakes try to make your sentence Smaller like,
[I was enjoying the comfort of my soft quilt, its warmth hugged my skin lightly. I was sleeping peacefully when Madam Beryl entered my room.
"Good morning Your Highness." She said in her very cheerful voice.]
That's it, I would have pinpoint more and reviewed but there was only one chp.
Also,
All the Best Keep it up. 