I wanna review, send your story link here!
Mine is Parallel World Queen and Rebirth Of The Female Devil. Thanks in advance
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Please have a go at reading this, i promise you, that you would enjoy every single moment, and suck in the richness of this story that reading it a second time wouldn't faze you but immerse you deeper into the world of Kian, and his story
Everybody hates the rain right?
The rain is quite the oxymoron,
lest they are morns for being an irony
When the sun shines it rains
So we sing rain rain go away,
come again another day.
what day exactly?
a sad day?
a happy day?
a cloudy day
everyone hates the rain right?
Why?
"I Love it"
Kian, A boy who feels found when under the rain,
"Kian, what makes you happy?"
"..."
"Kian?"
Silently in the distance a group of children in yellow rain coats sing "Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day"
This is the romantic and deeply moving story of a boy named Kian, who, rejected by his lover, feels despair and pain. He finds peace under the mysterious raindrops. In a world where he feels like an outsider, Kian strives to find true love and compassion while discovering himself and unravelling the mysteries of his own heart.
Unbeknownst to Kian, his world evolves gradually.
"When rainfall comes, the world grows magical," murmured an old woman from a distance, her voice carrying a gentle wisdom. She stood there, observing a young boy with dishevelled black hair and captivating cerulean eyes, his gaze filled with longing as he stared intently at the falling rain.
"The rain..."
"It's sad"
"Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day"
Hi I'm new to this but please do check out my novel and leave a comment. Hope you like it
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Elementary519
Yup, and the sentences told the same thing all over again
SYED_ASAD
Very nice, I like the story progression. though through the first 5 chapters, I haven't seen a correlation between the prologue and the rest chapters. The writing is nice, but it might be better if you avoid brandishing the paragraph with long sentences and keep some straightforward.
Here's mine, I hope you enjoy it!
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Rainandstorm
Umm... I think it might not be my cup of tea. The MC is too emotional for me. Well, it's a matter of taste, but could you tone down her anger a bit?
Here's my book hope you enjoy it.
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JA_Chrysant Hello, I just published the 20th chapter would you like to read?
Novel name - Servant of Greed
Novel Link - https://www.webnovel.com/book/servant-of-greed_26393645405972605
In a realm eternally draped in shadows, where the clash between day and night defines its very existence, a young boy from the enigmatic dark side finds his world shattered by a cataclysmic event.
In the midst of his grief and confusion, he forms an unlikely alliance with a powerful deity who emerges from the shadows. Together, they embark on a perilous journey to uncover the truth and restore the balance of the world.
Join this unlikely duo as they forge a path through darkness and light, unearthing the truths that will reshape their world and redefine their own destinies. Prepare to be enthralled by an epic journey where hope gleams amidst the darkest of nights.
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please I need reviews a lot because it will help me grow my book...
Warning: mature content is present, read at your own risk.
Despite her trying to sound cool, he could hear her slight pants.
"What were you doing?" He asked, forgetting everything.
That's how it was for them. They could be in the middle of the most serious issue yet the slightest change in their breathing would make the other curious.
"If I say that I was, or more like, am fingering myself while thinking about you, would you come here and f*ck me?" She said while putting two fingers inside of herself.
A moan left her lips and his d*ck hardens on the other side.
"F*ck, Andrew, ah," she was moaning on purpose, to get a reaction out of him.
She wanted to test him till he breaks and later fulfilled her with his entire being.
She knew that she wasn't supposed to want him and so did he but the heart wants what the heart wants.
And forbidden fruits always taste better.
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All of a sudden, he moved a little away and by not feeling the same sensation as before, she opened her eyes with an annoyed look.
She was almost about to come.
"Why did you stop -" she was cut off by her own moan.
He did the most unthinkable thing. He slapped her pu*sy. She thought that it would hurt her but it had the exact opposite reaction.
It ended up sending an electric shock through her body but one that was filled with pleasure. She was looking at him with pleading eyes.
She didn't know what she wanted him to do but she wanted something from him and he understood even though she didn't vocalize her thoughts.
He made a silent promise to fulfill all of her fantasies and with that, he slapped her again.
And she moaned in pleasure again. Who knew that something that counts as a punishment could bring one so much pleasure?
Tangled by an interesting past, lust, and underworld matters. And most importantly heart.
Both of them refused to fall for the other again but for how long? In this twisted game called lust, would they end up falling for each other?
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If it doesn't take too much of your time, is it okay if you read and review my novel. It's new and I'm taking a large gamble with it.
However if it's not possible I understand and hope you have a great day.
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JA_Chrysant
Oh, well, but am guessing you didn't even read up to chapter 20..
If you had kept on reading, you would have seen the progress, there wasn't any anger anymore
JA_Chrysant I would love it if you review mine, I'm a newbie though,https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26661402406082205?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4322188580