Ch0mper
Yup, I like your story. Wait, I'll go for more chapters, maybe this week, haha.
I wanna review, send your story link here!
JA_Chrysant
Here's mine!
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/krama-%7C-the-tales-of-the-numbered_26091675706237305
Thank you in advance ^_^
JA_Chrysant
Hi glad you think so. When you say the paragraph is clunky do you mean you think it's too long?
JA_Chrysant
If you want to learn, read and enjoy a action thriller romance book, then go check this one out..
What more could you need
https://www.webnovel.com/book/till-i-die-ivy_26088877705991305
JA_Chrysant it's my first work and might be lengthy for you.
It's a fantasy story in a way.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/echoes-of-rebirth-a-second-chance_26509657906572305
If you didn't like it or couldn't get through it you can drop it at anytime.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/a-ballad-of-absurdities_26480374905250505
Kindly review mine as well!
JA_Chrysant Heya! This is mine.
http://wbnv.in/a/80hhf7M I'll read whoever read mine.
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Hello everyone! JA_Chrysant Here's my new novel, would love to have your support ｡◕‿◕｡ Thankyou!
https://m.webnovel.com/book/from-ordinary-to-extraordinary-the-reincarnated-billionaire_26534860606656205
Hello!
check out my fantasy romance werewolf book!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/full-moon-(true-mates)_22905486506037105
Mine is Parallel World Queen and Rebirth Of The Female Devil. Thanks in advance
https://www.webnovel.com/book/rain-rain-go-away-come-again-another-day_26557020606729705
Please have a go at reading this, i promise you, that you would enjoy every single moment, and suck in the richness of this story that reading it a second time wouldn't faze you but immerse you deeper into the world of Kian, and his story
Everybody hates the rain right?
The rain is quite the oxymoron,
lest they are morns for being an irony
When the sun shines it rains
So we sing rain rain go away,
come again another day.
what day exactly?
a sad day?
a happy day?
a cloudy day
everyone hates the rain right?
Why?
"I Love it"
Kian, A boy who feels found when under the rain,
"Kian, what makes you happy?"
"..."
"Kian?"
Silently in the distance a group of children in yellow rain coats sing "Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day"
This is the romantic and deeply moving story of a boy named Kian, who, rejected by his lover, feels despair and pain. He finds peace under the mysterious raindrops. In a world where he feels like an outsider, Kian strives to find true love and compassion while discovering himself and unravelling the mysteries of his own heart.
Unbeknownst to Kian, his world evolves gradually.
"When rainfall comes, the world grows magical," murmured an old woman from a distance, her voice carrying a gentle wisdom. She stood there, observing a young boy with dishevelled black hair and captivating cerulean eyes, his gaze filled with longing as he stared intently at the falling rain.
"The rain..."
"It's sad"
"Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day"
Hi I'm new to this but please do check out my novel and leave a comment. Hope you like it 
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-reality-of-a-modern-royal_26452901405154605
Elementary519
Yup, and the sentences told the same thing all over again
SYED_ASAD
Very nice, I like the story progression. though through the first 5 chapters, I haven't seen a correlation between the prologue and the rest chapters. The writing is nice, but it might be better if you avoid brandishing the paragraph with long sentences and keep some straightforward.