JA_Chrysant sorry for the late reply and it seems you already left a review but if theres anything you thought I needed to work on, I would love to know now. Honest opinion!

      Mine is Parallel World Queen and Rebirth Of The Female Devil. Thanks in advance

        https://www.webnovel.com/book/rain-rain-go-away-come-again-another-day_26557020606729705
        Please have a go at reading this, i promise you, that you would enjoy every single moment, and suck in the richness of this story that reading it a second time wouldn't faze you but immerse you deeper into the world of Kian, and his story

        Everybody hates the rain right?
        The rain is quite the oxymoron,
        lest they are morns for being an irony
        When the sun shines it rains
        So we sing rain rain go away,
        come again another day.
        what day exactly?
        a sad day?
        a happy day?
        a cloudy day
        everyone hates the rain right?
        Why?

        "I Love it"

        Kian, A boy who feels found when under the rain,
        "Kian, what makes you happy?"
        "..."
        "Kian?"
        Silently in the distance a group of children in yellow rain coats sing "Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day"

        This is the romantic and deeply moving story of a boy named Kian, who, rejected by his lover, feels despair and pain. He finds peace under the mysterious raindrops. In a world where he feels like an outsider, Kian strives to find true love and compassion while discovering himself and unravelling the mysteries of his own heart.

        Unbeknownst to Kian, his world evolves gradually.

        "When rainfall comes, the world grows magical," murmured an old woman from a distance, her voice carrying a gentle wisdom. She stood there, observing a young boy with dishevelled black hair and captivating cerulean eyes, his gaze filled with longing as he stared intently at the falling rain.

        "The rain..."

        "It's sad"

        "Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day"

          SYED_ASAD
          Very nice, I like the story progression. though through the first 5 chapters, I haven't seen a correlation between the prologue and the rest chapters. The writing is nice, but it might be better if you avoid brandishing the paragraph with long sentences and keep some straightforward.

              Novel name - Servant of Greed
              Novel Link - https://www.webnovel.com/book/servant-of-greed_26393645405972605
              In a realm eternally draped in shadows, where the clash between day and night defines its very existence, a young boy from the enigmatic dark side finds his world shattered by a cataclysmic event.
              In the midst of his grief and confusion, he forms an unlikely alliance with a powerful deity who emerges from the shadows. Together, they embark on a perilous journey to uncover the truth and restore the balance of the world.
              Join this unlikely duo as they forge a path through darkness and light, unearthing the truths that will reshape their world and redefine their own destinies. Prepare to be enthralled by an epic journey where hope gleams amidst the darkest of nights.

                Warning: mature content is present, read at your own risk.

                Despite her trying to sound cool, he could hear her slight pants.

                "What were you doing?" He asked, forgetting everything.

                That's how it was for them. They could be in the middle of the most serious issue yet the slightest change in their breathing would make the other curious.

                "If I say that I was, or more like, am fingering myself while thinking about you, would you come here and f*ck me?" She said while putting two fingers inside of herself.

                A moan left her lips and his d*ck hardens on the other side.

                "F*ck, Andrew, ah," she was moaning on purpose, to get a reaction out of him.

                She wanted to test him till he breaks and later fulfilled her with his entire being.

                She knew that she wasn't supposed to want him and so did he but the heart wants what the heart wants.

                And forbidden fruits always taste better.

                -
                All of a sudden, he moved a little away and by not feeling the same sensation as before, she opened her eyes with an annoyed look.

                She was almost about to come.

                "Why did you stop -" she was cut off by her own moan.

                He did the most unthinkable thing. He slapped her pu*sy. She thought that it would hurt her but it had the exact opposite reaction.

                It ended up sending an electric shock through her body but one that was filled with pleasure. She was looking at him with pleading eyes.

                She didn't know what she wanted him to do but she wanted something from him and he understood even though she didn't vocalize her thoughts.

                He made a silent promise to fulfill all of her fantasies and with that, he slapped her again.

                And she moaned in pleasure again. Who knew that something that counts as a punishment could bring one so much pleasure?

                Tangled by an interesting past, lust, and underworld matters. And most importantly heart.

                Both of them refused to fall for the other again but for how long? In this twisted game called lust, would they end up falling for each other?

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                  JA_Chrysant
                  Oh, well, but am guessing you didn't even read up to chapter 20..
                  If you had kept on reading, you would have seen the progress, there wasn't any anger anymore

                      I would gladly take any criticism.
                      Just updated Chapter 21! if interested in medical, Fantasy, Slice of life, and isekai novels. Then give my novel a chance!! It's about a surgeon transmigrating and opening his clinic in a fantasy world. it's pretty much in the name of the novel...
                      https://www.webnovel.com/book/my-clinic-in-another-world_26457344405167405
                      Sypnosis:
                      Seo Jun is your average Surgeon, an everyday otaku. However, his simple life of pulling all-nighters and treating patients is turned upside down when he was killed by a colleague! Nevertheless, he was given the chance of transmigration by a mysterious grim reaper!

                      After transmigration, he finds himself in the body of a beggar, who was called Han!

                      He was given another chance at life with his gift [Clinic System], in a fantasy world. He is excited about his new start but unknowingly opens his clinic in a city that is currently at war!

                      Can Han who is overly cautious and a money lover, live peacefully? How will he and the clinic fare in such circumstances? Would he find out why he was sent to Arcancia?

                      Read more to find out about Han and his Clinic.

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