Bloom07
I haven't read the previous version, but your story premise is interesting. Hmm, but I feel like reading an observational report rather than a novel. Perhaps you could follow your favorite novel and tried his way of writing?

      TheWriter117
      I finished reading it. Your story have good premise, what if death took a vacation? Hahaha. It's also has details that I like. I would like to read more, and if it reach 5 chapters, i could finally review it. Keep up the good work, Author!

        Ruemari_Cordan
        I finished reading I'm still in love with my Ex (well to chapter 5), and boy, it's cute! But I think the key in romance novel is the character and chasing pace. For now, there is no chasing yet, but as for character... I still find it difficult to love the character. It'd probably because there's still no gap in the personality that makes the character distinctive and memorable (For example, Gia, the Kaichou could be uptight and strict, but she secretly ### etc). Keep up the good work, Author!

            SevenZeros
            Wow, the premise is interesting. I like it! But the writing could use some works (It's still rigid). Try to follow your favorite author style, and by time, own it as yours. Don't give up, fighting!

                Welp, time to sleep, see you guys tomorrow!! hehe

                  JA_Chrysant Thank you for the review and honest comment, I'll take note of everything. And I hope you didn't mind my comments and reviews to yours. It's my own opinion and I didn't mean to offend you in any ways. So, it's up to you if you'll listen to it. Maybe, I might be wrong. Anyway, thank you again.

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