Rin_Nurnia I left a few comments and a review super good work on dialogue and world building by the way I need to take a page out of your book when I’m writing dialogue because mine always comes off as clunky

    mahe_ale_aba read it it’s super good but it’s just not my cup of tea at the end of the day but I can tell it’s well written please continue writing your much better than I am. My current novel has a lot of amateurish writing right now that I’m looking to improve, but yours is definitely better than mine

      redlady already did it’s good again though romance just isn’t my cup of tea but your novel is of definite quality and I’m going to have to take a page out of your book and try to improve my own writing because I do plan on eventually having a love interest in my own novel

          ForerunnerOfSky I am done ! The review is not under your book , idk .Check my account !
          Thanks for the review, btw !

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