TsukasaFrier I'll 'Collection' it first, I don't really have the time to read it through so detailed now. Primary because I have to sleep. I'm going to Paragraph Comments and Review it tomorrow.

Who wants to review swap?
Does everyone truly deserve a second life? The idea of reincarnation is an opportunity for one to turn over a new leaf. However, what if God reincarnates someone just for his amusement and entertainment.

That's exactly the case of Fujikawa Takuji, an infamous mafia boss, who unfortunately met his end. God offered him a second life of evil in the Middle Realm, a world of swords and magic.

However, Takuji isn't reincarnated empty-handed. He is reincarnated with a system - Mafia System. However, Takuji is reincarnated as Chloe Granbel, the first child and first daughter of the Baron Granbel family.

Read Chloe's journey as she has to build a mafia group in a fantasy world. What will Chloe do to build connections and rise her mafia group

    RyujiSakamata Done! Would appreciate any thoughts you have about mine https://www.webnovel.com/book/eternal-knight_27123642006733305 and an honest review.

    Your story is good, your first chapter is really well written, the later ones not as good. If you want I could go through and comment on the places where tense switches happened, or grammar things, you could then fix them and delete the comments. Up to you though 🙂

      Hey. Just dropped my first chapter to my Web Novel series, My Mafia System: I'm Going To Build The Mafia In A Fantasy world. I'd appreciate it if you checked it out! And if you love it, please pick a collection and wait for more chapters.

      Does everyone truly deserve a second life? The idea of reincarnation is an opportunity for one to turn over a new leaf. However, what if God reincarnates someone just for his amusement and entertainment. That's exactly the case of Fujikawa Takuji, an infamous mafia boss, who unfortunately met his end. God offered him a second life of evil in the Middle Realm, a world of swords and magic. However, Takuji isn't reincarnated empty-handed. He is reincarnated with a system - Mafia System. However, Takuji is reincarnated as Chloe Granbel, the first child and first daughter of the Baron Granbel family. Read Chloe's journey as she has to build a mafia group in a fantasy world. What will Chloe do to build connections and rise her mafiagroup https://www.webnovel.com/book/27025968305098505/72925341009636296?utm_campaign=4322795312
      Please pick a collection.

        Name: Broadcast revealed I am A Medical Genius/God
        Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/broadcast-revealed-i-am-a-medical-genius-god_27163902606875105
        Synopsis: Humanity are social creatures they say but when money is given these creatures forget everything. The exact same thing happened, when the government issued a special experiment known as broadcasting of 14 people in one city or town without anyone else there, many human right activists protested.
        But when government fed them money and the people who liked the idea started to invest, no one had a choice but to follow the instructions. The 14 people who were chosen were all different celebrities from different countries.
        People thought that celebrities like these would just eliminate each other, and the government also concluded that also but when the game started, they were all in deep surprises because of one man only.

        This man was an actor with a huge fan following but being trapped with only 14 people revealed his true talents which left everyone in awe.
        So yeah, this is going to be fantasy and also there will be reactions to main protagonist's actions. No system only a genius brain will be there.

        Also first chapter is kind of cringy but I will make it better with all of the guides you guys provide

          Hey. Just dropped my first chapter to my Web Novel series, My Mafia System: I'm Going To Build The Mafia In A Fantasy world. I'd appreciate it if you checked it out! And if you love it, please pick a collection and wait for more chapters.

          Does everyone truly deserve a second life? The idea of reincarnation is an opportunity for one to turn over a new leaf. However, what if God reincarnates someone just for his amusement and entertainment. That's exactly the case of Fujikawa Takuji, an infamous mafia boss, who unfortunately met his end. God offered him a second life of evil in the Middle Realm, a world of swords and magic. However, Takuji isn't reincarnated empty-handed. He is reincarnated with a system - Mafia System. However, Takuji is reincarnated as Chloe Granbel, the first child and first daughter of the Baron Granbel family. Read Chloe's journey as she has to build a mafia group in a fantasy world. What will Chloe do to build connections and rise her mafiagroup https://www.webnovel.com/book/27025968305098505/72925341009636296?utm_campaign=4322795312
          Please pick a collection.

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