Hi fellow readers and authors, I just wrote the very first book in my entire life.
If you have the time and drop by, please kindly read my story and leave a feed back for improvement. Thank you!

Here is my submission for #5 Beast Evolution:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11379763805357105

Title: EvoMorph System
Current no. of chapters: 3

Sypnosis:

Talas Talim was just an ordinary college student on modern earth, and didn’t’ think much of his life until one day he accidentally died because he was doing his college thesis. By a twist of fate, he found himself reincarnated into a different and full of fantasy magical world! A world full of unknown and danger. A world where different and unknown species lived. How will Talas Talim survive in this unknown new world? Even more when he was reincarnated as a MOSQUITO!!

Spoilers:

“Ding!”
“Beast Quests!”
”Mosquito: Suck blood from any living being (0/1)(Rank E)”

"Ding!"
"Urgent Beast Quest!"
"Any Beasts: Suck the t*ts of the women in the bath!(0/10) (Rank A)"
"Time left: 30:00 minutes!"

(I just started writing, so don't expect much. But I will do my best for this story!)
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THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Yah this contest is around my ideas lately. From all the spirit beast I've read about lately in these books here, to dungeon and rpg game monsters, B movie monsters. Always wanted to hunt monsters for gold and loot. Also had an idea recently about making like a museum system, for different monsters. Hunt monsters and build a museum or habitat with them all. But an idea to become some monster with an evolution system. Kind of got to give nod to Coiling Dragon for quiet a few ideas for this. Can I even make a book though probably not, I ain't a writer just like to think about ideas and plots for such a story.

      Novel_X_Hunter Man. This is the cool mosquito. I feel remembering playing K.

      You are a genius thinking about blood sucking mosquito to evolve. Thumb up.

      You almost got 3k view/chapter for new novel. This is more than good start.

          SweetsTomato Thanks bro for your suggestion! I am considering at the moment, because I'm afraid I will dump huge lump of information all at once. Thanks again :)

              MasterRabbink Thank you for your compliment Master Rabbink! I just started writing and your compliment encouraged and motivated me to do my best! Thank you!

                  Hey guys.

                  Just wanted to let you know I am extremely happy and thankful for the positive feedback I received for my story. Since it is my first time writing anything, it means a lot to me.

                  I had a friend drew a cover photo for me and released the 6th chapter.

                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/11362483406339605/The-Monkey-God

                  Please keep letting me know of any comments and feedback you have to improve my writing so you can enjoy the story as much as I do while writing it.

                  Thank you once again!

                    CrazyTree xD
                    I want to read something like that too!
                    Just waiting for someone to make a story with that plot!
                    Since I'm still busy writing my own novel >.<

                        This is my first attempt in writing so I hope everyone is not too brutal but I appreciate creative criticism. I am aiming for 'Writing Prompts Contest #5 - Evolved Beasts in Another World'. Thank you in advance and I hope you will enjoy it.

                        Title: Soaring Voyage
                        Current Chapters: 7

                        https://www.webnovel.com/book/11386175605359405/Soaring-Voyage

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                        Synopsis
                        "The world is moving so do we, let's soar together in this lonely world, dearest Peregrine."

                        I was reborn as a Peregrine Falcon but I can evolve. However, I need to change a person's destiny to gain points to evolve?

                        [To evolve one must help or destroy a sentient life. The life must not end till one helps or destroys the life]
                        [Current status - 0/1]

                        How do I change my faith and why was I reborn in such a place and in this manner?

                        This is a story to uncover such mysteries.

                          Hello Everyone,
                          This is my first time writing a novel, so I hope you guys would give it a chance. I'm entering the 'Writing Prompts Contest #4 - Entertainment Industry'. I really appreciate any feedback, I'm know that I'm new, but I'm willing to improve. I hope you guys enjoy it and thanks a lot in advance. :)

                          https://www.webnovel.com/book/11403664306352105

                          Synopsis
                          Wang Tian He is the 3rd princess born in the great Wang’s Ancient Empire. She became skilled in the four arts: calligraphy, chess, painting, and Qin, just only at the small age of 7. Since she had the time and was bored with her life, she went to learn other arts. Then, 3 years later, she completely mastered dancing, acting, singing, and flute playing. Her family members were astounded that they birthed a genius, so they supported her in learning other arts. She was bored with arts for women, so she went ahead and started learning arts for men. Then, 5 years later, she became skilled in close combat martial arts, archery, horse backing riding, and sword fighting. However, on the day she mastered those skills and wanted to learn more, something happened.

                          System: “Host, you’re perfect to test this new ‘All Stars System!”

                          Tian He standing in a white space: “.....No”

                            Hey guys,

                            thanks for the comments and reviews so far. The positivity about my novel is an extreme help for me while writing. I never thought I would be so happy about a strangers encouragement and good criticism. ​I hope you will keep enjoying my story.

                            For all the new guys in the forum you can find my novel in the link below :

                            https://www.webnovel.com/book/11362483406339605/The-Monkey-God

                            I started it for the competition #5: Evolved Beasts in Another World.

                            As always any comments for improvements are welcome.

                              Please everyone read and check out my story for contest #5
                              Name: Evolution of the Rabbit God
                              It's about a palate (health) safety inspector who becomes a rabbit. There are 1660 others who reincarnate as humans who will have different powers and their memories of course. Most of those humans were criminals from a prison. He has a RuneScape system (i don't mention that name so directly in the story btw)

                              I got 6 chapters and just a few words short of 10k words (only like 10% of those words are repeated words or quest stuff i think)

                                No news about 6&7 week contest?
                                I'm start questioning web novel seriousness in making this contest 😑😑

                                  SweetsTomato Oh Lol! Finally realized it. No-Contest Thread at this hour. I think this is too 'fast'. 1 Week for Contest and 1 Week for 'scoring'/checking is better in my opinion.

                                  Have you got the result of 3rd contest? Your novel is the front page, together with other 'game' related novel. I believed this show the result had been delivered.

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