MansonFD7 It is indeed shady, what you give to them was permanent licensing agreement, not transfer of copyright. it is still possible to terminate the contract and revoke the license, but the editor is only the one who decide whether to terminate or not

    MansonFD7 hello!! Review is done. please, review mine if you have time. I will continue reading yours but it will take some time.

      MansonFD7 I still am trying to get a contract...as a writer, money is indeed important and I need at least one commercial success to brag about myself to other publishers...lol...but how did they contact you about the contract? Is there a requirement that you need to fulfill to get their attention?

          ToufiqUlAlam author or my stature...? I didn't ssy it was a terrible book, because its not. You have high school level writing skills (thats a good thing!) Which is unique from other writers. I simply didn't think we were making such specific critiques. I tend to allow my professor or signed authors read and critique my book, since they have some knowledge backing their skills. But thank you for your time ig?

              KingVinito still reading...did some constructive commenting. Also reviewed your book!! Please, do mine. I will keep reading and commenting to help you with my ideas. thank you!

                  ToufiqUlAlam you have two method, first is the contract invitation send by the webnovel editor when they are interest in your book, second is you can personally send the contract application. the second approach is quite difficult since it is depend on their discretion whether they want your book or not. but the contract invitation is 100% guarantee contract if you apply

                      xish101 1. win the wpc contest if you participate 2. just hope it would come some day since it depend on the book performance and editor discretion
                      noted that ML fantasy is quite hard to get contract invitation than FL genre

                          UelUel right? I mean you need inspiration! I can't just begin something where my mind is not! Creativity is not like that. This is why Naruto, Bleach, and One-punch Man got attractions yet dime a dozen isekai and reincarnation or resurrection stories are hard to put my mind to. They all look the same.
                          My original story was
                          "Strange Tale of a Little Mystic" but I then entered the WPC but didn't know how to promote it at that time. So my litrpg did not get any attention. However, the ones that ranked, were not too awesome either.

                            Rarajasmin_jazz Review done. Why? I couldn't wait to express my joy after reading the initial chapters...I am going to keep reading...I am in LOVE with your writing style... I will keep reading your story...

                              Rarajasmin_jazz please revise chapter 4 and try and find a way to lower the number of times 'enigma/tic' words have been used. At first, I did not notice its presence..but in chapter 4, i was FEELING it...ooo...it is SO there!!

                                Rarajasmin_jazz liked the story till 4th chapter. However, if you overly use poetic language...it will dry out at some point and you will see redundancy in your writing. sadly chapter 4 felt like you have hit a wall.
                                So, keep a balance between poetic and normal language. This will help the reader navigate the story better.

                                    Rarajasmin_jazz i read Synced. And felt that the author was very poetic at first. However, there was something that i told the author as well.
                                    Using the poetic style throughout a chapter will make the narrative gradually less attractive.

                                    The narrative style you have is an amazing weapon in your arsenal. But you cannot show this amazing and effective weapon to your reader too often. if you do so, readers will get accustomed to this style and then will expect something better. However, if you do not deliver what they expect, you may lose your readers fast.
                                    The first 3 chapters will definitely bring in readers. But then come back to the colloquial English...not the heavy flowery type. Use that style only when you are describing intense emotion...
                                    Frankly, I envy you. What I can't and perhaps will never be able to do, you do it so effortlessly. If you want to revise, this is the time. If you expand the story even more without revision, you will not be able to come back later.
                                    I hope I did not hurt your feelings. I opened this thread so we can help each other improve.
                                    I can't hire editors as they are very expensive. So, let us help each other and edit our work for better commercial performance...

                                        Dungeon_Warrior are you sure you understand the post? Beta-reader means you have to read through all the chapters slowly and let me know where I can improve...you can be harsh and honest...I really wish to improve.
                                        You can get a quick review in other threads...I can assure you that.

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