WrightBrothers take it slow!! Don't worry! Be harsh...! I will do the same. Constructive criticism is expected...Cheers.

      ToufiqUlAlam ah, i see. Well I'm apart of a writing community with real authors, so I usually have them beta read my books. what do you mean by earn my review/ Is this just a review swap?

        xish101 adding to library, will start reading and commenting first. Will review when I get an understanding of the chapters... cheers..My book's link is at the top.

          xish101 As you can see, I am looking for someone who will read the whole book. It's already finished. So, review chapter by chapter at the end of it or you can come and post your thoughts here. You can take your time and I will do the same to yours. when you are done with the book, you can review it.

            ToufiqUlAlam i have started reading yours as well. Here are the biggest issues

            1 chapters quickly drag with nothing interesting happening
            2 thinks that are interesting gets ruined by the lack of excitement

            3 narration is terrible. That is the first thing you should fix when writing

            Summary- is very boring so far, and the reader doesn't sumptuous with a character just because you tell them to. Fix those big issues

            I didn't know we were only sharing negative critiques lol
            If i did then i would prob nit have done rhis. But since u already posted on my book, i'll do urs as well💅

                xish101 review is done...but reading is not...I will keep reviewing chapter wise..plz do the same thanks.

                  KingVinito starting yours too...will take some time but expect collections and comments in the meantime.
                  and please, do the same for me...don't just say you liked or didn't like it...you should mention where I can change. Give me constructive instructions...thanks. My book is at the top of the thread.

                      ToufiqUlAlam

                      I would love to beta read your book where I'll give some comments, feedbacks, and even review. But if you don't mind an Action Sci-Fi with lots of action scene, you would love this book.

                      Title: Scorching Black Vulture

                      Synopsis:
                      The scorching virus outbreak plunged the Galean planet's ecosystems into lunacies. No antidotes are effective in countering this tiny virus, as it also infected the advanced technologies.

                      The entire Galean organization, including Minerva, has to combat this virus on any occasion by creating the Authonoid, which stands for Authorized Android.

                      They aimed to combat the scorching virus while heavily immunized them. Unfortunately, this virus was constantly developing each time.

                      And to make matters worse, some elites were exploiting this virus by profiting it to fulfilling their political agendas.

                      Tsuyuki is the Minerva's Authonoid, and with his friends, he has to fight against the continuous outbreak, political unrest, and many unforeseen threats.

                      Link:
                      https://www.webnovel.com/book/scorching-black-vulture_22073496706380905

                          MansonFD7 Hello there! Beta readers are always welcome. You can find my book's link in the original post.

                              ToufiqUlAlam hey! I just wanted to say that you can stop reading mine if you would like. I can't continue reading yours because, to put it bluntly, its not that interesting to me. I'll write a review for it so far, but U'm not doing any more comments. I'll replicate the same review you do for mine. Thanks

                                  MansonFD7 It is indeed shady, what you give to them was permanent licensing agreement, not transfer of copyright. it is still possible to terminate the contract and revoke the license, but the editor is only the one who decide whether to terminate or not

                                    MansonFD7 hello!! Review is done. please, review mine if you have time. I will continue reading yours but it will take some time.

                                      MansonFD7 I still am trying to get a contract...as a writer, money is indeed important and I need at least one commercial success to brag about myself to other publishers...lol...but how did they contact you about the contract? Is there a requirement that you need to fulfill to get their attention?

                                          ToufiqUlAlam author or my stature...? I didn't ssy it was a terrible book, because its not. You have high school level writing skills (thats a good thing!) Which is unique from other writers. I simply didn't think we were making such specific critiques. I tend to allow my professor or signed authors read and critique my book, since they have some knowledge backing their skills. But thank you for your time ig?

                                              KingVinito still reading...did some constructive commenting. Also reviewed your book!! Please, do mine. I will keep reading and commenting to help you with my ideas. thank you!

                                                  ToufiqUlAlam you have two method, first is the contract invitation send by the webnovel editor when they are interest in your book, second is you can personally send the contract application. the second approach is quite difficult since it is depend on their discretion whether they want your book or not. but the contract invitation is 100% guarantee contract if you apply

                                                      xish101 1. win the wpc contest if you participate 2. just hope it would come some day since it depend on the book performance and editor discretion
                                                      noted that ML fantasy is quite hard to get contract invitation than FL genre

                                                          UelUel right? I mean you need inspiration! I can't just begin something where my mind is not! Creativity is not like that. This is why Naruto, Bleach, and One-punch Man got attractions yet dime a dozen isekai and reincarnation or resurrection stories are hard to put my mind to. They all look the same.
                                                          My original story was
                                                          "Strange Tale of a Little Mystic" but I then entered the WPC but didn't know how to promote it at that time. So my litrpg did not get any attention. However, the ones that ranked, were not too awesome either.

                                                            Rarajasmin_jazz Review done. Why? I couldn't wait to express my joy after reading the initial chapters...I am going to keep reading...I am in LOVE with your writing style... I will keep reading your story...

                                                              Rarajasmin_jazz please revise chapter 4 and try and find a way to lower the number of times 'enigma/tic' words have been used. At first, I did not notice its presence..but in chapter 4, i was FEELING it...ooo...it is SO there!!

                                                                Rarajasmin_jazz liked the story till 4th chapter. However, if you overly use poetic language...it will dry out at some point and you will see redundancy in your writing. sadly chapter 4 felt like you have hit a wall.
                                                                So, keep a balance between poetic and normal language. This will help the reader navigate the story better.

                                                                    Rarajasmin_jazz i read Synced. And felt that the author was very poetic at first. However, there was something that i told the author as well.
                                                                    Using the poetic style throughout a chapter will make the narrative gradually less attractive.

                                                                    The narrative style you have is an amazing weapon in your arsenal. But you cannot show this amazing and effective weapon to your reader too often. if you do so, readers will get accustomed to this style and then will expect something better. However, if you do not deliver what they expect, you may lose your readers fast.
                                                                    The first 3 chapters will definitely bring in readers. But then come back to the colloquial English...not the heavy flowery type. Use that style only when you are describing intense emotion...
                                                                    Frankly, I envy you. What I can't and perhaps will never be able to do, you do it so effortlessly. If you want to revise, this is the time. If you expand the story even more without revision, you will not be able to come back later.
                                                                    I hope I did not hurt your feelings. I opened this thread so we can help each other improve.
                                                                    I can't hire editors as they are very expensive. So, let us help each other and edit our work for better commercial performance...

                                                                        Dungeon_Warrior are you sure you understand the post? Beta-reader means you have to read through all the chapters slowly and let me know where I can improve...you can be harsh and honest...I really wish to improve.
                                                                        You can get a quick review in other threads...I can assure you that.

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