xish101 1. win the wpc contest if you participate 2. just hope it would come some day since it depend on the book performance and editor discretion
noted that ML fantasy is quite hard to get contract invitation than FL genre

      UelUel right? I mean you need inspiration! I can't just begin something where my mind is not! Creativity is not like that. This is why Naruto, Bleach, and One-punch Man got attractions yet dime a dozen isekai and reincarnation or resurrection stories are hard to put my mind to. They all look the same.
      My original story was
      "Strange Tale of a Little Mystic" but I then entered the WPC but didn't know how to promote it at that time. So my litrpg did not get any attention. However, the ones that ranked, were not too awesome either.

        Rarajasmin_jazz Review done. Why? I couldn't wait to express my joy after reading the initial chapters...I am going to keep reading...I am in LOVE with your writing style... I will keep reading your story...

          Rarajasmin_jazz please revise chapter 4 and try and find a way to lower the number of times 'enigma/tic' words have been used. At first, I did not notice its presence..but in chapter 4, i was FEELING it...ooo...it is SO there!!

            Rarajasmin_jazz liked the story till 4th chapter. However, if you overly use poetic language...it will dry out at some point and you will see redundancy in your writing. sadly chapter 4 felt like you have hit a wall.
            So, keep a balance between poetic and normal language. This will help the reader navigate the story better.

                Rarajasmin_jazz i read Synced. And felt that the author was very poetic at first. However, there was something that i told the author as well.
                Using the poetic style throughout a chapter will make the narrative gradually less attractive.

                The narrative style you have is an amazing weapon in your arsenal. But you cannot show this amazing and effective weapon to your reader too often. if you do so, readers will get accustomed to this style and then will expect something better. However, if you do not deliver what they expect, you may lose your readers fast.
                The first 3 chapters will definitely bring in readers. But then come back to the colloquial English...not the heavy flowery type. Use that style only when you are describing intense emotion...
                Frankly, I envy you. What I can't and perhaps will never be able to do, you do it so effortlessly. If you want to revise, this is the time. If you expand the story even more without revision, you will not be able to come back later.
                I hope I did not hurt your feelings. I opened this thread so we can help each other improve.
                I can't hire editors as they are very expensive. So, let us help each other and edit our work for better commercial performance...

                    Dungeon_Warrior are you sure you understand the post? Beta-reader means you have to read through all the chapters slowly and let me know where I can improve...you can be harsh and honest...I really wish to improve.
                    You can get a quick review in other threads...I can assure you that.

                      Dungeon_Warrior done. but remember please, if you want to be here you must be ready to read the whole book and then give an honest review..not just one-line reviews. We read, spend our time, and use our brain to analyze the work of others and try to help them to improve. We expect the same from you 😃 after all, you want to be a BETA Reader!!
                      We will increase your reader's data and valid reading data, so help us improve ours. thanks.

                      By the way, if you read we will also increase your reader count data which is very important. This will help you understand how you can get more reader and retain them in the long run. That's the goal, right?

                        ToufiqUlAlam I must say that even though Webnovel sometime seem unfair, but it is one of the platforms that has the largest reader. Especially in the fantasy and action genre. The attraction will be based on the performance of the book; if it looks like most reader is not interested, then they will just ignore the book.

                            NewbieJimjim thanks a lot!! well, it all depends on luck. i have seen some very successful books with weirdAss names like Really LONG...translated type work or something...
                            If they are that successful, then it really puts a lot of uncertainty into the hearts of writers like me...

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