Drethin

  • Mar 18, 2021
  • Joined Nov 25, 2017
  • Yep it's pretty annoying. First they remove the 1000 coin fast pass, now this... It's super frustrating. Not only that, but the reward for consecutively checking in for 30 days isn't even a genre specific pass, is a book specific pass... You'd think a one time reward for using the app every day for a month wouldn't be something so useless.

    Plus, why on earth doesn't a fantasy pass work on Eastern fantasy or fantasy romance....

  • Keeps happening to me as well, it's incredibly annoying to finish reading a book, and then get prompted to add it to your library again.... And then when you log back in you find out your progress wasn't recorded...

    • Not sure if an unedited chapter was uploaded by accident, or if this chapter was just not edited at all, but the quality is pretty bad compared to previous chapters.

      • Here are some more:

        people from Blackgod Shelter would charge some fees from people who was fishing there. > people from Blackgod Shelter would charge some fees from people who were fishing there.

        and three persons in the front were cut in the chest and died immediately. > and three people in the front were cut in the chest and died immediately.

        The other two persons survived luckily > The other two people survived luckily

        However, as Han Sen just left the frozen lake > However, just as Han Sen left the frozen lake

        "Boss, he is the one who killed of our brothers." > "Boss, he is the one who killed our brothers."

        a man in black mail with eyes like hawk > a man in black mail with eyes like a hawk

        The men in black mail > The man in black mail

        He pointed it to Han Sen and said > He pointed it at Han Sen and said

        you killed my men at the place of that God shelter > I have no idea what this is supposed to mean, maybe: you killed my men in my God shelter??

        so you deserved to die > so you deserve to die

        As he said, the men quickly slashed the knife at Han Sen > As he said that, the man quickly slashed his knife at Han Sen

        The strike from the men in blackmail > The strike from the man in blackmail

        which surprised the men in black mail > which surprised the man in black mail

        The two persons cut at Han Sen > The two people cut at Han Sen

        dodging the attacks from both persons. > dodging the attacks from both people.

        However, he there was no way he could dodge the strike from the men in blackmail was chasing after him. > However, there was no way he could dodge the strike from the man in black mail chasing after him.

        broke the siege of the two persons > broke the siege of the two people

        "We could not let him leave alive." > "We can't let him leave alive."

        showing strong desire to get rid of him. > showing a strong desire to get rid of him.

        The Blackgod would not tolerate any challenge to his interests or authority > This is the first mention of Blackgod, I assume he's the man in black mail? Han Sen refers to him as Blackgod later in the chapter but there is no mention of him learning his name. Either keep calling him "the man in black mail" or refer to him as Blackgod throughout the entire chapter. It makes no sense to switch half way through, and is confusing.

        This is it for typos and mistakes that I found for this chapter. There seems to be many mistakes in every chapter for this novel and it's unacceptable for a premium novel. If this wasn't a premium novel I wouldn't be so picky, but this is something people pay money for. Spend some of that money and get a decent editor, or stop being a premium novel.

        Sorry @Orven if there are duplicates, I tried to avoid posting what you found but I'm sure I got a few.

        Edit: Tagging @gsk

        • Not a big deal, but there is a typo when the app asks me to rate it. Dose instead of does. This is on Android 7.0

          • Did no one edit this chapter???

            All the instances of stimulating should be changed to simulating.

            However, there were suddenly a huge number of stimulating crystals. > However, there was suddenly a huge number of simulating crystals.

            Having lost the connection to Daphne > Having lost connection to Daphne

            People scattered in the ruin > People were scattered in the ruin

            This architecture of Crystallizers looked like a metropolitan built with crystal. > This architecture of Crystallizers looked like a metropolitan city built with crystal.

            Li Mingtang also said, "Captain, since you are already here, and there are a lot of stimulating crystals outside, we could not leave anytime soon. It makes sense for us to take Wang Hou's advice and look around first. If we could locate the treasure, we would be able to finish the task and have some clues as to how we should leave this place." > Li Mingtang also said, "Captain, since you are already here and there are a lot of simulating crystals outside, It makes sense for us to take Wang Hou's advice and look around first. If we can locate the treasure, we will be able to finish our task and have some clues as to how we should leave this place."

            They were only several people without even a surpasser among them, so it was still quite dangerous for them to walk around. > They were only a few people and they didn't even have a surpasser with them, so it was still quite dangerous for them to walk around.

            However, she did not have other options than to agree to their suggestions and go deeper. > However, she did not have any option other than to agree to their suggestions and go deeper.

            Based on general rules of Crystallizer civilization > Based on the general rules of Crystallizer civilization

            In addition, Han Sen was also a graduate of a famous military Academy. > In addition, Han Sen is also a graduate of a famous military Academy.

            Han Sen felt quite confused. He did not understand most part of it. > Han Sen felt quite confused. He did not understand most of what they were saying.

            All he knew was that the Crystallizer king seemed to be of high rank and possess lots of treasure. > All he knew was that the Crystallizer king seemed to be of high rank and possessed lots of treasure.

            Han Sen did not understand anything about Crystallizer civilization and Diya Galaxy. > Han Sen did not understand anything about Crystallizer civilization and the Diya Galaxy.

            However, the nine-life cat dependent on his neck > However, the nine-life cat pendent on his neck

            It took them less than half an hour to prize it open. > It took them less than half an hour to prise open. OR It took them less than half an hour to pry it open.

            places on the researcher to be infected. > places on the researcher to become infected.

            whoever had succeeded in practicing Micro Crystal should follow me > whoever has succeeded in practicing Micro Crystal should follow me

            "Professor, you could not go inside." > "Professor, you should not go inside."

            a huge discovery like this had to be made under the surveillance of AI > a huge discovery like this has to be made under the surveillance of AI

            one could resist the wandering light of crystal. > one can resist the wandering light of crystal.

            When we go out and gain connections to Daphne > When we go out and reconnect with Daphne

          • @WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL @CKtalon Just a heads up this is still an issue, nothing has been fixed. The end of chapter 150 is missing a bunch of stuff. Here's what's missing according to the machine translation:

            As for the present, what thing the fellow who this does have a high and respected position is? Link mana emerges magic wand immediately, Starseizer magic wand sends out the dazzling light to come, under this rays of light shines, the Link facial expression looks lightly own this domineering rampant big brother: „This is not you should the thing of bumping, Wharton. Magician magic wand is the sword of soldier, is never false the second person of hand. The Wharton complexion changes, the smiling face was paler, the hand that he extends does not receive, in the hand emerged rich battle qi Radiance, searched as before: „What's wrong, my younger brother, studied has selected magic, in didn't take a broad view at my this big brother?” He cultivates Morani Family handed down in the family ice wind battle qi, now is level 4 warrior, he is self-confident, even if takes a broad view at entire Kingdom, is the master, but this younger brother, the considering everything studies magic is about one year. Studies magic is about one year of fellow, can have the big skill? As for his gadget of these illumination, most likely is the thing that this boy takes to keep up appearances. Therefore, he has made such an extremely unwise choice. The next quarter, Link rays of light dodges, 4-Level(s) Edelweiss magic activates instantaneously, assumes the radiated force field fiercely ejection! Link is controlling the force field range, has not injured to arrive around mother, eldest sister and steward, but in Wharton this side, force field, one has actually hit. Bang!’ Wharton touches to guard, the hand was shot, his whole person also hit unceasing backlash. Um, the boy, you dares to begin to me unexpectedly!” Wharton is angry, in Morani Family, he kept promises already for many years, even if were the father does not dare to go against his will, but this Third Brother has been timider to him, now dares to counter-attack unexpectedly! Finally is in his heart anger crazily wells up, battle qi erupts reckless, the whole person clashes crazily, he must teach the younger brother who this is not obedient maliciously!( To be continued.)

            This was copied from here: https://lnmtl.com/chapter/descent-of-the-god-of-magic-book-2-chapter-150

            • gsk replied to this.
            • Not sure if the original is missing stuff, or the translation is, but the beginning of the chapter seems like it is missing a bunch of stuff.

              • Not sure what's going on this chapter, feels like a bunch of stuff is missing or skipped.

                • I mentioned this a few days ago, but there has been no change, and newly released chapters have this mistake as well.

                  Here's the last post I made.
                  https://forum.webnovel.com/d/6065-immortal-mortal-chapter-999

                  I'm still noticing the same kind of error in the most recent chapters, misusing win. You win a competition, you beat an opponent...

                  Here's an example from chapter 1017:
                  "As long as you win me, my storage ring will be yours."

                  This should be "As long as you beat me, my storage ring will be yours."

                  @WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL
                  @TeamSparrow

                • If you write "he won the puppet" it means that he gained the puppet, like he participated in a competition. came first, and the prize was a puppet. Win/won/winning [object] means that you gain [object]. If you want to use it as he came first in a competition, you would say "he won the competition"

                  So in the examples above, you don't want to say that they earned the puppets, you want to say they fought against, and were victorious against the puppets, so you would say they beat the puppets.

                  Here's a better explanation:

                  http://keepsmilingenglish.com/2015/05/confusing-verbs-9-win-vs-beat/

                  • Mo Wuji, how many puppets did you win in the seventh round?

                    Do you know how many puppets I won

                    I won six god puppets. If I wanted to go all-out, I might have even won the seventh puppet

                    he could really win a god puppet

                    winning a Heavenly God Level 5 puppet would earn him another 30 points

                    I could have even won ten god puppets

                    only win two god puppets in the seventh round

                    Won/win should be beat, or won/win against, winning should be beating or winning against. I see this exact mistake pretty often in this novel, and other novels as well. Not sure how it gets through editing without being fixed all the time.

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