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yaoyueyi Thanks Bot-God.

Well... only the bold formating worked here for me xD

Seshata
You are most welcome.
I usually into the same trap. The 10% rule works, but I find it hard to follow in Webnovels. When you have to upload at least one chapter a day, not to mention edit and rewrite, one hour's work easily stretches to two or three.
All in all, your individual style in the book makes it easy to read. You're doing great so far.

Seshata
You are most welcome.
I usually into the same trap. The 10% rule works, but I find it hard to follow in Webnovels. When you have to upload at least one chapter a day, not to mention edit and rewrite, one hour's work easily stretches to two or three.
All in all, your individual style in the book makes it easy to read. You're doing great so far.

Seshata
I like the fact that you started your story with a retelling of past glories. You can tell the MC is hung up on his past. You can also tell that shit will hit the fan before you even reach the end of the chapter and read it for yourself.
The MC's voice is also sarcastic and hilarious. The references to video games makes it even more relatable to the readers.
I might have found some paragraphs a bit infodumpy for my taste tbh. When you speak of his sister sending him emojis on where he should shove his trophy, then dusting it off, sending pics to annoy the parents. It's nice to know that their parents don't approve, but it may be too early to delve into that. I spaced out a little during those paragraphs and had to re-read them.
Other than that, it's a solid start, makes me want to read more.

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Avalondra

"Every end is a beginning," she went on. "I grew bored of this cycle. Offer me entertainment, and I shall give you powers beyond your understanding."

• Perhaps by offering shorter paragraphs, we can keep this thing going. To your keyboards everyone, and let your creativity flow.

Darth_Xiane She grinned, and her amber eyes drew me toward her. I felt mesmerized and terrified at once. My heart pounded against my eardrums as the world fell eerily silent.
She called out to me, her voice a whisper that traveled through my body, through my entire being. I shivered.
She called out to me again: "let's play," she said.

ShinSungmi
Done

The Legend Of Black Eyes:

My story's about a man in quest for revenge. If you're looking for a fantasy with a dark theme, gore, and manipulation, then this one might be your cup of tea.

It has an OP mc, from weak to strong elements, but no system. It's more of a high fantasy where spells and skills aren't counted with magic points.

Join Zedd in his quest for revenge. He's a strange man with a strange appearance. See him act all high and mighty during the first volume.

Volume two goes back in time to show us the rise of the man known as Zedd Darkstar through hardships, tears and blood, a lot of blood...

Last, but not least, this is not a heroic tale. It's a story about a man whose life has been nothing but a series of misfortunes. It's a story about a man who wouldn't back away from killing his way to his objective, regardless of the consequences.

If you do not enjoy any of the elements mentioned above, please do not waste your time reading it.

If you do however, then happy reading.
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14367438306198305?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4303350152

Check out my story: The Legend Of Black Eyes.
I sure hope it fits this thread's requirements as I've written it with evil mc as an objective. I always found caring about everyone's needs and trying to save the day to be boring.
Lemme know what you think of Darkstar ;)

Deliverer Here's one by yours truly.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/14367438306198305/The-Legend-of-Black-Eyes

GD_Cruz I've only read the synopsis and added the story to my library. I'll have a look at it and give you an honest review.
I'm doing something different as well, it's fantasy. Have a look at it and let me know what you think.
I also advise you to look for paperback books, if it's for research purposes. It'll help you improve your style. You'll also pick up some neat tricks from the authors.
A good example would be the Dresden Files. Read that, you won't regret it.
Here's a link to my webnovel:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/14367438306198305/The-Legend-of-Black-Eyes