Dungeon_Warrior are you sure you understand the post? Beta-reader means you have to read through all the chapters slowly and let me know where I can improve...you can be harsh and honest...I really wish to improve.
You can get a quick review in other threads...I can assure you that.

    Dungeon_Warrior done. but remember please, if you want to be here you must be ready to read the whole book and then give an honest review..not just one-line reviews. We read, spend our time, and use our brain to analyze the work of others and try to help them to improve. We expect the same from you 😃 after all, you want to be a BETA Reader!!
    We will increase your reader's data and valid reading data, so help us improve ours. thanks.

    By the way, if you read we will also increase your reader count data which is very important. This will help you understand how you can get more reader and retain them in the long run. That's the goal, right?

      ToufiqUlAlam I must say that even though Webnovel sometime seem unfair, but it is one of the platforms that has the largest reader. Especially in the fantasy and action genre. The attraction will be based on the performance of the book; if it looks like most reader is not interested, then they will just ignore the book.

          NewbieJimjim thanks a lot!! well, it all depends on luck. i have seen some very successful books with weirdAss names like Really LONG...translated type work or something...
          If they are that successful, then it really puts a lot of uncertainty into the hearts of writers like me...

            I can hardly keep track of the love My readers are showing.
            I will try to give credit where I can. But Please, keep in mind, that you were the first to take an interest in my work...you will always be remembered.
            @MansonFD7
            @Rarajasmin_jazz
            @GEEGEE
            @UelUel
            @xish101
            @Penality
            @B_l_a_n_k_2167
            @WrightBrothers
            @KingVinito
            @Dungeon_Warrior
            @Patrik_Crown
            @intothedarkabyss
            And so many more!! I cannot track all of you…But you are and will be remembered as long as my work lives.

              ToufiqUlAlam

              Done.

              I think it'll be better if you do lots of rephrasing with some rephrasing website like Quillbot/ProWritingAid to make some sentence felt better to read.

              In which means, it should be slightly complex, but easy to understand.

              And with some advices I've give on every paragraphs' comments, hope this'll help.

              Or maybe, we could beta read each other for more, or even as crazy as discussing our book in our discord's DM.

                  MansonFD7 we can!! I was thinking of creating a BETA readers' channel but I am not good with discord!! I will definitely link up!!! thanks!!! I will look into the websites you told me to look into...

                    MansonFD7 Quillbot/ProWritingAid

                    I use grammerly but I cannot get access to the Premium and if these two also wants me to get premium, I cannot do that. 😃
                    I don't have credit card.... hehehe...otherwise, I would access the hell out of all sorts of readymade help out there!!! But hopefully someday, I will!!
                    Things may change...that's why I am still keeping the book as paused.

                        Hi guys!!! Lots of love to your!!! I have come here with another request!!!
                        This book is in development as a part of 'AyodaleVerse'...heroes will meet together in future to bring an end to the evil!!

                        https://www.webnovel.com/book/strange-tales-of-a-little-mystic-book-one_27462978606833505
                        Like always, reading, commenting and reviewing and collection, PLEASE PLEASE!!! Take time!!! but let me know what do you feel about the story!

                        intothedarkabyss thank you very much!!! I would love to know what's going wrong or right...I definitely appreciate...
                        As we don't have ability to hire editors, we authors help each other find mistakes and help each other...
                        You are a pro at this. Your help will sure be credited as I do for everyone else.
                        Thank you very much.
                        I have two books. One book just ended...
                        https://www.webnovel.com/book/aboron-book-one---a-dystopian-prelude_27234960406111505
                        and the other one is in progress...
                        https://www.webnovel.com/book/strange-tales-of-a-little-mystic-book-one_27462978606833505

                        you can take your time...and you don't have to be so formal. Just point out mistakes or suggestions in general as I cannot afford a pay. thank you very much!!

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