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There is romance in my novel. I’m still sorry if I done something wrong. But I didn’t violate any forum rules.
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Maze of the Forgotten Masters
Synopsis
Before the maze was constructed, there was the ancient empires known with their magnificent powers.
When the ancient empires were being weakened day by day with their continuous wars between them, a man who called himself as dark emperor showed up and declared war to every empire.
Many empires and kingdoms fell in the wind of war that caused by the dark emperor.
While the hopes for the peace were almost lost, Forgotten Masters constructed a maze to protect people from the war of the ancient empires.
Maze succeed to protect the people from the war of the ancient empires and even from the dark emperor himself.
Years have passed but the history never changed.
When the people started a new war inside the maze, Arthur woke up in a dark dusty room and just managed to survive somehow but with a problem, who was Arthur?
Some details about the story
The story starts with mysteries and epic moments while continues with action scenes a lot.
This is the story of a man, who tries to learn his past while the bells for the war was ringing.
I hope you enjoy the novel.
Have a nice day.
Maze of the Forgotten Masters
Synopsis
Before the maze was constructed, there was the ancient empires known with their magnificent powers.
When the ancient empires were being weakened day by day with their continuous wars between them, a man who called himself as dark emperor showed up and declared war to every empire.
Many empires and kingdoms fell in the wind of war that caused by the dark emperor.
While the hopes for the peace were almost lost, Forgotten Masters constructed a maze to protect people from the war of the ancient empires.
Maze succeed to protect the people from the war of the ancient empires and even from the dark emperor himself.
Years have passed but the history never changed.
When the people started a new war inside the maze, Arthur woke up in a dark dusty room and just managed to survive somehow but with a problem, who was Arthur?
Some details about the story
The story starts with mysteries and epic moments while continues with action scenes a lot.
This is the story of a man, who tries to learn his past while the bells for the war was ringing.
I hope you enjoy the novel.
Have a nice day.
Maze of the Forgotten Masters
Synopsis
Before the maze was constructed, there was the ancient empires known with their magnificent powers.
When the ancient empires were being weakened day by day with their continuous wars between them, a man who called himself as dark emperor showed up and declared war to every empire.
Many empires and kingdoms fell in the wind of war that caused by the dark emperor.
While the hopes for the peace were almost lost, Forgotten Masters constructed a maze to protect people from the war of the ancient empires.
Maze succeed to protect the people from the war of the ancient empires and even from the dark emperor himself.
Years have passed but the history never changed.
When the people started a new war inside the maze, Arthur woke up in a dark dusty room and just managed to survive somehow but with a problem, who was Arthur?
Some details about the story
The story starts with mysteries and epic moments while continues with action scenes a lot.
This is the story of a man, who tries to learn his past while the bells for the war was ringing.
I hope you enjoy the novel.
Have a nice day.
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Maze of the Forgotten Masters
Synopsis
Before the maze was constructed, there was the ancient empires known with their magnificent powers.
When the ancient empires were being weakened day by day with their continuous wars between them, a man who called himself as dark emperor showed up and declared war to every empire.
Many empires and kingdoms fell in the wind of war that caused by the dark emperor.
While the hopes for the peace were almost lost, Forgotten Masters constructed a maze to protect people from the war of the ancient empires.
Maze succeed to protect the people from the war of the ancient empires and even from the dark emperor himself.
Years have passed but the history never changed.
When the people started a new war inside the maze, Arthur woke up in a dark dusty room and just managed to survive somehow but with a problem, who was Arthur?
Some details about the story
The story starts with mysteries and epic moments while continues with action scenes a lot.
This is the story of a man, who tries to learn his past while the bells for the war was ringing.
I hope you enjoy the novel.
Have a nice day.
Maze of the Forgotten Masters
Synopsis
Before the maze was constructed, there was the ancient empires known with their magnificent powers.
When the ancient empires were being weakened day by day with their continuous wars between them, a man who called himself as dark emperor showed up and declared war to every empire.
Many empires and kingdoms fell in the wind of war that caused by the dark emperor.
While the hopes for the peace were almost lost, Forgotten Masters constructed a maze to protect people from the war of the ancient empires.
Maze succeed to protect the people from the war of the ancient empires and even from the dark emperor himself.
Years have passed but the history never changed.
When the people started a new war inside the maze, Arthur woke up in a dark dusty room and just managed to survive somehow but with a problem, who was Arthur?
Some details about the story
The story starts with mysteries and epic moments while continues with action scenes a lot.
This is the story of a man, who tries to learn his past while the bells for the war was ringing.
I hope you enjoy the novel.
Have a nice day.
Thanks for all the recommendations guys.
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Katzenliebe I looked to your first chapter and I think your doing well.
I can give you only one advice at that point,
- You should improve your synopsis.
If you write 50 or more chapters probably you will get more accurate advices on your novel.
But I think first chapter is really good.
Maze of the Forgotten Masters
Synopsis
Before the maze was constructed, there was the ancient empires known with their magnificent powers.
When the ancient empires were being weakened day by day with their continuous wars between them, a man who called himself as dark emperor showed up and declared war to every empire.
Many empires and kingdoms fell in the wind of war that caused by the dark emperor.
While the hopes for the peace were almost lost, Forgotten Masters constructed a maze to protect people from the war of the ancient empires.
Maze succeed to protect the people from the war of the ancient empires and even from the dark emperor himself.
Years have passed but the history never changed.
When the people started a new war inside the maze, Arthur woke up in a dark dusty room and just managed to survive somehow but with a problem, who was Arthur?
Some details about the story
The story starts with mysteries and epic moments while continues with action scenes a lot.
This is the story of a man, who tries to learn his past while the bells for the war was ringing.
I hope you enjoy the novel.
Have a nice day.
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Maze of the Forgotten Masters
Synopsis
Before the maze was constructed, there was the ancient empires known with their magnificent powers.
When the ancient empires were being weakened day by day with their continuous wars between them, a man who called himself as dark emperor showed up and declared war to every empire.
Many empires and kingdoms fell in the wind of war that caused by the dark emperor.
While the hopes for the peace were almost lost, Forgotten Masters constructed a maze to protect people from the war of the ancient empires.
Maze succeed to protect the people from the war of the ancient empires and even from the dark emperor himself.
Years have passed but the history never changed.
When the people started a new war inside the maze, Arthur woke up in a dark dusty room and just managed to survive somehow but with a problem, who was Arthur?
Some details about the story
The story starts with mysteries and epic moments while continues with action scenes a lot.
This is the story of a man, who tries to learn his past while the bells for the war was ringing.
I hope you enjoy the novel.
Have a nice day.
Maze of the Forgotten Masters
Synopsis
Before the maze was constructed, there was the ancient empires known with their magnificent powers.
When the ancient empires were being weakened day by day with their continuous wars between them, a man who called himself as dark emperor showed up and declared war to every empire.
Many empires and kingdoms fell in the wind of war that caused by the dark emperor.
While the hopes for the peace were almost lost, Forgotten Masters constructed a maze to protect people from the war of the ancient empires.
Maze succeed to protect the people from the war of the ancient empires and even from the dark emperor himself.
Years have passed but the history never changed.
When the people started a new war inside the maze, Arthur woke up in a dark dusty room and just managed to survive somehow but with a problem, who was Arthur?
Some details about the story
The story starts with mysteries and epic moments while continues with action scenes a lot.
This is the story of a man, who tries to learn his past while the bells for the war was ringing.
I hope you enjoy the novel.
Have a nice day.
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Maze of the Forgotten Masters
Synopsis
Before the maze was constructed, there was the ancient empires known with their magnificent powers.
When the ancient empires were being weakened day by day with their continuous wars between them, a man who called himself as dark emperor showed up and declared war to every empire.
Many empires and kingdoms fell in the wind of war that caused by the dark emperor.
While the hopes for the peace were almost lost, Forgotten Masters constructed a maze to protect people from the war of the ancient empires.
Maze succeed to protect the people from the war of the ancient empires and even from the dark emperor himself.
Years have passed but the history never changed.
When the people started a new war inside the maze, Arthur woke up in a dark dusty room and just managed to survive somehow but with a problem, who was Arthur?
Some details about the story
The story starts with mysteries and epic moments while continues with action scenes a lot.
This is the story of a man, who tries to learn his past while the bells for the war was ringing.
I hope you enjoy the novel.
Have a nice day.
Maze of the Forgotten Masters
Synopsis
Before the maze was constructed, there was the ancient empires known with their magnificent powers.
When the ancient empires were being weakened day by day with their continuous wars between them, a man who called himself as dark emperor showed up and declared war to every empire.
Many empires and kingdoms fell in the wind of war that caused by the dark emperor.
While the hopes for the peace were almost lost, Forgotten Masters constructed a maze to protect people from the war of the ancient empires.
Maze succeed to protect the people from the war of the ancient empires and even from the dark emperor himself.
Years have passed but the history never changed.
When the people started a new war inside the maze, Arthur woke up in a dark dusty room and just managed to survive somehow but with a problem, who was Arthur?
Some details about the story
The story starts with mysteries and epic moments while continues with action scenes a lot.
This is the story of a man, who tries to learn his past while the bells for the war was ringing.
I hope you enjoy the novel.
Have a nice day.
Maze of the Forgotten Masters
Synopsis
Before the maze was constructed, there was the ancient empires known with their magnificent powers.
When the ancient empires were being weakened day by day with their continuous wars between them, a man who called himself as dark emperor showed up and declared war to every empire.
Many empires and kingdoms fell in the wind of war that caused by the dark emperor.
While the hopes for the peace were almost lost, Forgotten Masters constructed a maze to protect people from the war of the ancient empires.
Maze succeed to protect the people from the war of the ancient empires and even from the dark emperor himself.
Years have passed but the history never changed.
When the people started a new war inside the maze, Arthur woke up in a dark dusty room and just managed to survive somehow but with a problem, who was Arthur?
Some details about the story
The story starts with mysteries and epic moments while continues with action scenes a lot.
This is the story of a man, who tries to learn his past while the bells for the war was ringing.
I hope you enjoy the novel.
Have a nice day.
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Maze of the Forgotten Masters
Synopsis
Before the maze was constructed, there was the ancient empires known with their magnificent powers.
When the ancient empires were being weakened day by day with their continuous wars between them, a man who called himself as dark emperor showed up and declared war to every empire.
Many empires and kingdoms fell in the wind of war that caused by the dark emperor.
While the hopes for the peace were almost lost, Forgotten Masters constructed a maze to protect people from the war of the ancient empires.
Maze succeed to protect the people from the war of the ancient empires and even from the dark emperor himself.
Years have passed but the history never changed.
When the people started a new war inside the maze, Arthur woke up in a dark dusty room and just managed to survive somehow but with a problem, who was Arthur?
Some details about the story
The story starts with mysteries and epic moments while continues with action scenes a lot.
This is the story of a man, who tries to learn his past while the bells for the war was ringing.
I hope you enjoy the novel.
Have a nice day.
You can check my book if you like fantasy genre, https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/19018446105955005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4315539071
luflaga Thanks for the feedback, I’ll try to fix it.
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SrtaA Thanks for the feedbacks I will try to improve the novel as much as I can. Also you are so right about the things you are saying.
lilGoat thanks for that opinion I’ll try that.
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Hi everyone,
I am writing a novel right now and I need some feedbacks about how can I improve my novel.
I am not giving the name of the novel since this would be unfair and we have forum rules. You can search my name to see the book in the searching novels section.
I just want to say that it is a fantasy genre novel.
If you can give a feedback, that will help me a lot to improve my novel.
And also I’m not asking for review, I’m just asking you to write a feedback to that topic.
Thanks and have a nice day.