Hey buddy can you review my work and tell me the areas I need improvement in .
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12653004805371405/CHAOTIC-ASURA

Synopsis :Chaos is the beginning ,chaos is the end ,chaos is the truth. In the world where everyone is born with an attribute that brings the ire of everyone ,every time he is born he brings the chaos himself and complete destruction. Born with 7 attributes he should have been a genius the world envy but he was sent to exile after he was born. The path he choose challenge the heavens or succumb to heavens it is all upto him now . The path he choose is of the Asura.

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    Since you changed the requirements for novel review to 25 plus chapters, I will wait. But did not want to lose this thread.

    If you decide to go back to lower than 25 chapters here is my link if not I will post again when I reach the correct amount.

    https://www.webnovel.com/book/12834608106610305/Runeless

      Elude

      Hello Book Curator! Nice to meet you, I'm Book Keeper! :laughing:

      If you ever want to join the discussion on good original novels, visit this thread. I would appreciate any of your input!

        I don't have a link cuz I use the app, and I am NOT the author, but look up the webnovel "Daedalus" sometime. Its well written AND uncontracted, so it won't cost spirit stones to read. The chapters are around 3k words each. One thing to keep in mind when reading it is that the author is planning to re-write chapters 2-5 and chapter 6 is when the novel begins to shine.

          23 days later

          Hello!

          Can you all review my first novel? :)
          You can give this a try as it's not a pure romance novel. :)

          NOVEL : The Bewitched Soul
          Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13168629905940905

          SYNOPSIS:
          A 5 year old Margaret lived with her widowed mother in a small village of Brookville. For the little girl everything seemed perfect until one day her world drowned in an ocean of blood.
          As the only survivor of the massacre, will Margaret be able to survive? Will she be able to unfold the mystery behind the death of her mother?

          It's a fictional story and is ongoing.
          It's an all in one novel dealing with mythical creatures. With right amount of mystery, suspense, adventure and romance.
          Please do give it a read and maybe a review will help me a lot! This is my first novel and I expect honest reviews from you all! :)

          Thank you all :)

            7 days later

            Title: Broken Caged Heart
            Genre: Romance Fiction
            Author: mvphoenix (me haha)
            Synopsis: Greed , Money, and Power. Is this all that matters? Why does the world revolve around them? Why is it that they are important to everyone? If this is what the world has come to I want to be excluded.
            This world is filthy. Is it worth living in such a place?
            I am so stupid to think that I could live cleanly in such a world. I'm so unlucky.
            The darkness has touched me.
            Can I still hope for love?

            https://www.webnovel.com/book/13041938605448705/Broken-Caged-Heart

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              If you do have time. Please spare a little and leave a review of my first ever book..
              Title: Tales of the Supremes
              Author: MyCharacterLeads
              Thanks in advance..

                Elude If you have time, please review my book

                Title: Conquer
                Link:https://m.webnovel.com/book/11059734505251305
                Synopsis:Inspired by their father's words. These brothers set off with a goal of conquering everything in their path be it: Betrayals, romance or themselves. Follow their journey from childhood to adults as they set about conquering the entire world.

                    Elude

                    I’ll let you review mine when I reach 25 chapters.

                    I hope that you’ll like it when the time comes.

                    It’s about Warriors and stuff

                        Title: The Damn Hunter
                        Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12138731905986405/The-Damn-Hunter
                        Synopsis: Yang Guang is the last hunter protecting his city from The Damn, creatures from another universe aiming to harm humans to strengthen themselves but the damn are not the only problems that Yang Guang need to face as he ventures beyond the small city into the world and discover a secret that should not be reveal for another two thousand years.
                        Hope you enjoy my novel :D

                          I'll just leave this here so please feel free to look at it!

                          Title: Brutal Journey of an Unfortunate Female Heroine
                          Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11724532206492105/Brutal-Journey-of-an-Unfortunate-Female-Heroine

                          Synopsis: Reina wasn't killed. She didn't die by an accident. She fulfilled the conditions to a devil's inevitable game and was given a chance that only came to those who had the courage to take it, or in her case with no choice but to. Transported to another world she strives to defy the gods and live her life as she pleases but, will things really be that easy? Faced with unavoidable loses and trials Reina must overcome and harden herself for this new world where only the strong survive.

                          Comment on how I could improve! Any advice is welcomed!,,ԾㅂԾ,,

                            withlovetale sure why not? : )
                            I have left one and thanks for your review. I seriously need some suggestions and you gave quite good pointers!

                            If you know then please do tell- how many reviews or views are required to have an overall ratings for the novel? I am totally new to this ...scratches my head so I am illiterate regarding this matter!

                              Sapphirechelsea237 Sure! I just finished yours. I tried to be in-depth and went on a point by point basis. Hope it’s helpful! (:

                              As for reviewing mine, I don’t mind comments on chapters instead of a review. I’d rather know the reactions after each chapter’s events rather than an overall idea. Up to you~!

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