MeloncholyKay ohhhhh yeah I need fix that. Ill do that right now. How is the next chapter tho? Idk how I should do it. Should I do for lines 3 or just 6 lines. I've seen other books and some don't even do lines. If you look at my one reviewer he said the no skip line hurts his eyes since he's reading on a phone. Which is strange since i read it on my phone and it felt normal. I guess that was me half assing trying to fix it.

      DragonKnight531 Sigh I think I know what you mean with a reviewer saying it hurts his eyes. Here's a LINK of a similar post, am I right? It was the spacing that hurts his eyes and that was because you have one whole paragraph before and after that ~(May)~ in your first chapter.

      And then, I clarified it to you with this post LINK. :) I hoped then that this was clear but the correction you did was not what I posted. You just had to separate your one whole paragraph with only 2 - 3 sentences per paragraph, not separate the lines.

      Maybe it's me who's not good at explaining. ๐Ÿ˜ž Then, I hope someone can clarify this to DragonKnight531.

          DazzlingGem oh shit your right. Thank you!๐Ÿ‘i did get your explanation but I forgot about it lol I was so worried about the plot and how my style was seen I didn't pay attention to the spaceing and format. how's the story tho, I think we can both agree I need experience in writing so far.

              DragonKnight531 Tbh, I've only read the synopsis and that part of chapter 1 that I tried to edit. The writing was the most noticeable so I don't actually want to continue reading it. I'm sorry. It's not just yours though, so I've never really tried any originals. Sorry again.

              But, I'll try to finish reading your first chapter, and try to give some advice, and comment on the story too. Fortunately, it's near my break time now so I have time. :)

                  DazzlingGem oh okay yeah sure. (ยด๏ฝฅ_๏ฝฅ`) that's understandable. I don't know why I feel excited to be writing here. I had another story on wattpad but that place was pretty dead so I made a new story and woah and behold everyone respond so quick and are so helpful เฒฅโŒฃเฒฅ I love this app!

                      DragonKnight531 Well, you can just continue writing here. It's practice too. :) Anyway, I think I'll post my reply on your story on a post you've started. I think we're hijacking this one. ๐Ÿ˜… Or more like just me inserting myself on your conversation with the OP.

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