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MeloncholyKay well, can you check mine, too? https://m.webnovel.com/book/12137193405983005

MeloncholyKay i have no stones left, but i can see your novel is promising. A female lead and video games is a nice mix for me.

Sure~ would it be fine if you check mine too?

Lets exchange reviews

Title: Choosing the Perfect Husband
https://m.webnovel.com/book/12099559305923005

Reinesse you definitely need some light editing, but you still peeked my interest

BerriApplepi I tried to read, but i kept getting hung up on the grammar. Have you triedd contacting LightHouse on the Inkstone Discord ?

Elude Let me know once you decide to write a novel And I'm glad that you enjoyed it since I'm still working on how to write a proper story Thank you for giving it a try

MeloncholyKay Nope, I haven't tried it yet since I don't have a discord xD

I'm still working on my grammars tho hahaha that's why I decided to write so that I can improve

I dont have stones left
How can i earn spirit stones anyway??

Elude i think it's piqued tho... i'm not really sure

Elude do you mind reviewing mine? i've heard you reviewed a lot of novels honestly, i think i also need one. there are only seven chapters tho.

Check my book too it only has one chapter so it won't take much time and please give me feedback https://m.webnovel.com/book/11888098305596105

BerriApplepi definitely haha. You should definitely get one. People there can give you some amazing advice!

MeloncholyKay Okay! I'll go get one! Thank you for this

yosi

When you end a sentence, use a space after the period.
" end. I " example.

If your asking a question, even if in novels, use a question mark.

Please use commas.

On the phone, so i cant pick apart your story to a further degree, but you should look into getting an editor.

I like the idea and look forward where you take it

BerriApplepi maybe not use "( )" in your story >-<

You can put your thoughts at the end, because im not sure if those are the character thoughts or youts.

MeloncholyKay Oh! Okay! Thank you ≧∇≦ It's actually the character's but I'll go change it.

MeloncholyKay How can I join a chat in discord?

Can someone check out my novel and point out my mistakes
https://m.webnovel.com/book/12200080106081005