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Author: Swordfane
Title: Path of the Tyrant King
Genre: Cultivation
Novel Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12515675406710405/Path-of-the-Tyrant-King
Synopsis:

Long ago a boy was born to a powerful clan, he was on track to inherit his grandfather's mantle, but alas he fell in love with the wrong person.

What happened next was only karma, he was beaten and flogged to death by his kinsmen and with a single breath left he cursed them. He would return one day and leave no traces of this wretched clan. He then used a forbidden method to condense his essence into one.

This boy would become the highest demon under heaven, leaving a reign of terror that spanned eons. His evil heritage left an indelible mark upon history. But alas righteousness prevailed once again and the great demon was slain, eras passed and his mark all but disappeared.

A Blood Moon hangs as a forgotten corpse rises, the great demon returns once again!

This is great of you. I made a reply before this, but it's my last few chapters that I could use a review on so I deleted it. Thanks for offering though!

Thank you in advance :D

Author: FluffyKiller
Title: A Demon's Paradise
Genre: Romance Fiction, Cultivation
Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11881242006585305/A-Demon's-Paradise
Synopsis: Moyin isn't a good person. Never has been. Even the people who she is closest to would say she is a maniac. However, when she winds up in the body of a dead slave girl in a world that isn't earth, she doesn't want to make trouble. All she wants to do is live out the rest of her extended lifetime doing what she loves and being left alone. But against her wishes, a certain shameless prince won't leave her alone and every time they meet he wants to snuggle up and get friendly. Although, most of the time, he isn't her biggest headache. It's the hypocritical fools that keep trying to kill her that really piss her off.

Most of the time

Thanks you for this.

Title: The Archaic Elements
Author: Vats
Genre: Magical Realism
Synopsis: In Avis Realm, Cultivators shatter the Shackles which bind their Mortal Soul from reaching the Divine. Ten shackles to Divinity remains the destination yet no one has ever succeeded in a thousand years.
In this world dominated by strength drifts a kid who has no idea of where his journey leads. Neither is he aware of the truth regarding his ORIGIN.
Azyl felt his world collapse when he heard his father cry out in pain. He didn't quite understand what his parents were saying, neither did he try to grasp what had happened. In his mind only one thought revolved as he could only think of one kind of a person. An Elementalist.
Only they had powers which could make a person writhe in pain for ten years. And he had aspired to become like them one day. But now all Dreams felt so far away. He didn't want to become someone like the person who hurt his father. Yet fate had other plots designed for him.

He was forced to enter the Elements Academy in West Cloud City, against all his wishes. He had made up his mind to never study Elemental arts.
Until he came face to face with the cruel reality of life.
A miracle encounter leads to him inadvertently going down a journey that he never could have imagine.
Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12118348406949905/The-Archaic-Elements

Thanks for this, i just finished the prologue and would love to have some thoughts on the beginning of my story!

Author: SmarthLad
Title: The Universe is Innately Just
Genre: Futuristic setting, Cultivation, Magical Realism
Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12563156406920305/The-Universe-is-Innately-Just
Synopsis:
In the 24th of December 2118, they came.

They came with knowledge, with technologies, and last but not the least, they came with change.

A fleet of unknown origin took upon Earth, with their only goal being the integration of Earth into a bigger world.

The reason? Earth finally reached its maturity. Humanity was no longer a young civilization.

In the middle of all this, Fell Pluck, a young 17 year old, saw this as an opportunity to change his destitute life in the city of New Casablanca.

Thanks for this. I'll make some time to review your work too. minyol

Author: char
Title: Through Thick and Thin
Genre: [Fantasy], System, Cultivation
Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12525545205756005/Through-Thick-and-Thin
Synopsis:
A person who has aspirations and dreams is a normal person. Then what do you call a person who follows his aspirations and dreams through ‘any’ situation? A Madman… or A Legend…?

Follow our curious protagonist cum student, Raj, through thick and thin in his journey in overcoming all obstacles in order to satisfy his curiosity. His aspiration lies in his curiosity and his curiosity is his aspiration. And this curiosity will make him outstanding, to the point that he would shine as brightly as the sun. And it will be this same curiosity that will fill his path with all kinds of obstacles. He will be joined by his bunch of friends on this tumulting journey. See how they are affected by his aura of curiosity.
And as part of the icing on the cake, he somehow gets a system, Curiosity system. Hard Work alone cannot make an extraordinary person, luck works hand in hand with hard work. And our protagonist isn’t short of luck… until obstacles start to hinder his path.

The world, which is called Zamin, on which Raj lives is not normal at all. Although it has its own kind of wars and threats, it is quite different from our earth in sense of religions and races which altogether changes history and technological advances. There are some similarities too, which includes an education system, an industrial system, and a government. The thing that makes it a truly unique world is that this world doesn’t only have humans on it. Anything further is anyone's guess.

minyol Hye, I'll head to your story after this. Please review my work too...

Author: dreamingjuliet
Title: Love System: Changing Destinies
Genre: Romance, Transmigration, BL
Link:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12103023806926205
Synopsis:
Jae is a loser. By all means. Countless time he thinks of killing himself, but he is afraid of death. Until one day.

He wakes up and found out he's dead. And have been given a second chance to live. But not for himself, for others. His tasks, change the destinies of ten loveless individuals.

Fail to do so, his soul will be thrown into hell as his punishment for killing himself.

The story is a hard-core BL story with full smut. I hopefully like it. It is still in first arc.

Author Penqiuyan
Title Sweet Desire
Genre Historical Romance
Link https://www.webnovel.com/book/11906083006601005/Sweet-Desire
Synopsis
"You will regret this Mei Sou Fei!" cried Li Shimin Bide as he watches her clean close.
"Sweet desire are like poison to one's soul," reply Mei Sou Fei while giving him one last sweet kiss.
Mei Sou Fei steps back and fell into the icy river below. Li Shimin Bide grabs his chest as if he was in pain.
What happened to the two? What events led up to this moment?

I am still going through everyone's work! Keeping my promise while trying to procure a 4th chappie huhu this is so hard

qostoq I recommend everyone here to check this dude's book. Phenomenal. :) More chapters please!

Xiaoyiyi8 your MC's emotions were so raw that I felt like crying
Main con: Definitely have your grammar checked. The english is already there, but not quite.
Addtl thing: The world was described quite nicely. I hope more time is given to this because the talent is there. You should show it in words.
Left an official review on your book.
Great job! :)

Author: DarkClaymore
Title: Classmancers - A MOBA Esport Story
Genre: Esports
Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11086315406252105/Classmancers---A-MOBA-Esport-Story
Synopsis:

Yuel’s life changes when Classmancers rolls into his life, a MOBA video game that’s growing into an official sport. Even with the fitness of a slug, he can finally enjoy a team sport to the fullest!

Unfortunately, the joy is short-lived. None of his peers take the game as seriously and his ruthless tactics only further discourage them from playing.

Fed up with playing alone in the game’s toxic online mode, he sets out to find like-minded teammates. That’s when he meets Lars, an energetic goof with godlike mechanical skill. With Yuel’s brains and Lars’s brawn, they form a dynamic duo and aim for Classmancers’ pro scene.

But first, they must conquer the competitive scenes of middle school and high school. There, they’ll come face to face with the truth: they’re not the only talented players around.

Between Aegis, a leader who boasts absolute defense, and Athena, a fox who wraps enemies around her finger, many obstacles await Yuel and Lars on the thorny road to the top.

Author: Lovelesss
Title: Ablackwing
Genre: Fantasy, Romance
Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/10608062205077005
Synopsis:
One Winged Demon... Angel of Death... Monster... Those were the titles he acquired on the day when he descended to hell in rage. His sword sung a melody of death as he slaughtered countless devils. He was cold, ruthless and dangerous.

She was a human who used to look at the moon and long for unknown feelings. She used to have a strange dream of an angel who grew beautiful white wings on his back and ascended to the clouds.

One day, angels started falling from the sky. He fell in her backyard. And for some reasons, he treated her as if she was someone more precious to him than anything the world has to offer...

minyol thank you you too! Hope more readers will come ur way <3