Thanks you for this.

Title: The Archaic Elements
Author: Vats
Genre: Magical Realism
Synopsis: In Avis Realm, Cultivators shatter the Shackles which bind their Mortal Soul from reaching the Divine. Ten shackles to Divinity remains the destination yet no one has ever succeeded in a thousand years.
In this world dominated by strength drifts a kid who has no idea of where his journey leads. Neither is he aware of the truth regarding his ORIGIN.
Azyl felt his world collapse when he heard his father cry out in pain. He didn't quite understand what his parents were saying, neither did he try to grasp what had happened. In his mind only one thought revolved as he could only think of one kind of a person. An Elementalist.
Only they had powers which could make a person writhe in pain for ten years. And he had aspired to become like them one day. But now all Dreams felt so far away. He didn't want to become someone like the person who hurt his father. Yet fate had other plots designed for him.

He was forced to enter the Elements Academy in West Cloud City, against all his wishes. He had made up his mind to never study Elemental arts.
Until he came face to face with the cruel reality of life.
A miracle encounter leads to him inadvertently going down a journey that he never could have imagine.
Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12118348406949905/The-Archaic-Elements

    Thanks for this, i just finished the prologue and would love to have some thoughts on the beginning of my story!

    Author: SmarthLad
    Title: The Universe is Innately Just
    Genre: Futuristic setting, Cultivation, Magical Realism
    Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12563156406920305/The-Universe-is-Innately-Just
    Synopsis:
    In the 24th of December 2118, they came.

    They came with knowledge, with technologies, and last but not the least, they came with change.

    A fleet of unknown origin took upon Earth, with their only goal being the integration of Earth into a bigger world.

    The reason? Earth finally reached its maturity. Humanity was no longer a young civilization.

    In the middle of all this, Fell Pluck, a young 17 year old, saw this as an opportunity to change his destitute life in the city of New Casablanca.

    Thank you very much! Here's mine. If you're interested with something like a light novel/ranobe approach, I think I can recommend mine. :D

    Author: AkaGin
    Title: Normal in Parenthesis
    Genre: Realistic Fiction, Slice of Life, Comedy, Romance, Psychological, Drama
    Novel Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12466790606528905
    Synopsis:
    "The world is unfair and unjust."

    Gin Sakato, a high school student finds himself in a seemingly normal life. But everything changed just right after he was starting to discover his once lost emotions. With a life changing event, he faces the darkness of the reality and learn what is the reason of his being.

      Thanks for this. I'll make some time to review your work too. minyol

      Author: char
      Title: Through Thick and Thin
      Genre: [Fantasy], System, Cultivation
      Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12525545205756005/Through-Thick-and-Thin
      Synopsis:
      A person who has aspirations and dreams is a normal person. Then what do you call a person who follows his aspirations and dreams through ‘any’ situation? A Madman… or A Legend…?

      Follow our curious protagonist cum student, Raj, through thick and thin in his journey in overcoming all obstacles in order to satisfy his curiosity. His aspiration lies in his curiosity and his curiosity is his aspiration. And this curiosity will make him outstanding, to the point that he would shine as brightly as the sun. And it will be this same curiosity that will fill his path with all kinds of obstacles. He will be joined by his bunch of friends on this tumulting journey. See how they are affected by his aura of curiosity.
      And as part of the icing on the cake, he somehow gets a system, Curiosity system. Hard Work alone cannot make an extraordinary person, luck works hand in hand with hard work. And our protagonist isn’t short of luck… until obstacles start to hinder his path.

      The world, which is called Zamin, on which Raj lives is not normal at all. Although it has its own kind of wars and threats, it is quite different from our earth in sense of religions and races which altogether changes history and technological advances. There are some similarities too, which includes an education system, an industrial system, and a government. The thing that makes it a truly unique world is that this world doesn’t only have humans on it. Anything further is anyone's guess.

        minyol Hye, I'll head to your story after this. Please review my work too...

        Author: dreamingjuliet
        Title: Love System: Changing Destinies
        Genre: Romance, Transmigration, BL
        Link:
        https://www.webnovel.com/book/12103023806926205
        Synopsis:
        Jae is a loser. By all means. Countless time he thinks of killing himself, but he is afraid of death. Until one day.

        He wakes up and found out he's dead. And have been given a second chance to live. But not for himself, for others. His tasks, change the destinies of ten loveless individuals.

        Fail to do so, his soul will be thrown into hell as his punishment for killing himself.


        The story is a hard-core BL story with full smut. I hopefully like it. It is still in first arc. 😳

          Author Penqiuyan
          Title Sweet Desire
          Genre Historical Romance
          Link https://www.webnovel.com/book/11906083006601005/Sweet-Desire
          Synopsis
          "You will regret this Mei Sou Fei!" cried Li Shimin Bide as he watches her clean close.
          "Sweet desire are like poison to one's soul," reply Mei Sou Fei while giving him one last sweet kiss.
          Mei Sou Fei steps back and fell into the icy river below. Li Shimin Bide grabs his chest as if he was in pain.
          What happened to the two? What events led up to this moment?

            So_mi haha! Well, that's unfortunate. I can totally see it selling as a webtoon.

            Keep up the great work, though 😘

              I am still going through everyone's work! Keeping my promise while trying to procure a 4th chappie huhu this is so hard 😂

              Thank you so much! I've been dying to hear some feedback! Here's mine~!
              Author: Nightmare_Taichou
              Title: Cross Worlds: The Tale of Two Boys who swapped worlds
              Genre: Fantasy/Magic/Action
              Novel Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12618622806175005/Cross-Worlds%3A-The-Tale-of-Two-Boys-who-swapped-worlds
              Synopsis:

              Two worlds: Earth and Sekai—a world where magic and technology coexist.

              Two boys—Tachibana Yuri. An ordinary Japanese boy with a normal life, and has a love for manga.

              Yuri Tachibana. Short-tempered Third Prince of the Saishi Kingdom known for his recklessness and punk-like behaviour.

              What will happen when they accidentally switch worlds? Chaos and hilarity of course.

                qostoq I recommend everyone here to check this dude's book. Phenomenal. :) More chapters please!

                Xiaoyiyi8 your MC's emotions were so raw that I felt like crying 😭
                Main con: Definitely have your grammar checked. The english is already there, but not quite.
                Addtl thing: The world was described quite nicely. I hope more time is given to this because the talent is there. You should show it in words.
                Left an official review on your book.
                Great job! :)

                  minyol thank you so much Minyol :D
                  I have two novels, please review them.

                  Author: himawarishima
                  Title : Miss Nuggets and Lemonade
                  genre : Romance
                  Novel link :
                  [links] (https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12542472705831305)

                  Synopsis

                  Between love and duty, which one is one person should choose when it comes to marriage?

                  But in my story? Its a little of both when I enter this new phase of life.
                  As a result? Big AWKWARD. Yup. Even with the big capital letters can't sum up my feelings.
                  Because it mix with guilty, feeling wrong, tense, a little bit giddy when facing my new borrowed handsome husband.
                  And why is that? It because the groom end up marrying the bridesmaid when my big sister, the bride went missing on that big event!

                    minyol and one more

                    Author: himawarishima
                    Title: Blood Minus
                    Genre: Fantasy
                    Novel link:
                    [Links (https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12597685805056705)

                    Synopsis

                    Blood is a body fluid in humans and other animals that delivers necessary substances such as nutrients and oxygen to the cells and transports metabolic waste products away from those same cells.

                    That what I read from Wikipedia. And blood has four main components: plasma, red blood cells, white blood cells, and platelets.

                    I am a human, so of course, normally, I should have these four components too. But the last words of my grandma, and all the weird instruction she keeps remind me as far I can remember, making me doubt myself.

                    If I am not human, then what am I?

                    If the outside world knew how different my blood is, will I always need to hide and never feel safe?

                      Author: DarkClaymore
                      Title: Classmancers - A MOBA Esport Story
                      Genre: Esports
                      Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11086315406252105/Classmancers---A-MOBA-Esport-Story
                      Synopsis:

                      Yuel’s life changes when Classmancers rolls into his life, a MOBA video game that’s growing into an official sport. Even with the fitness of a slug, he can finally enjoy a team sport to the fullest!

                      Unfortunately, the joy is short-lived. None of his peers take the game as seriously and his ruthless tactics only further discourage them from playing.

                      Fed up with playing alone in the game’s toxic online mode, he sets out to find like-minded teammates. That’s when he meets Lars, an energetic goof with godlike mechanical skill. With Yuel’s brains and Lars’s brawn, they form a dynamic duo and aim for Classmancers’ pro scene.

                      But first, they must conquer the competitive scenes of middle school and high school. There, they’ll come face to face with the truth: they’re not the only talented players around.

                      Between Aegis, a leader who boasts absolute defense, and Athena, a fox who wraps enemies around her finger, many obstacles await Yuel and Lars on the thorny road to the top.

                        Author: Lovelesss
                        Title: Ablackwing
                        Genre: Fantasy, Romance
                        Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/10608062205077005
                        Synopsis:
                        One Winged Demon... Angel of Death... Monster... Those were the titles he acquired on the day when he descended to hell in rage. His sword sung a melody of death as he slaughtered countless devils. He was cold, ruthless and dangerous.

                        She was a human who used to look at the moon and long for unknown feelings. She used to have a strange dream of an angel who grew beautiful white wings on his back and ascended to the clouds.

                        One day, angels started falling from the sky. He fell in her backyard. And for some reasons, he treated her as if she was someone more precious to him than anything the world has to offer...

                          minyol thank you 😍😍😍 you too! Hope more readers will come ur way <3

                          Well I'll take you up on your kind offer
                          Author: Gahira
                          Title: The Fairy And The Demon King
                          Genre: Fantasy,Romance,Comedy,Isekai
                          Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12647782506360205/The-Fairy-And-The-Demon-King
                          Synopsis:After losing in battle to the hero and fleeing,the demon king meets a fairy!
                          what will happen to the two of them when they embark on an adventure together?

                          Also your novel seems pretty interesting,I'm looking forward to how the story evolves!

                            RIP minyol
                            Everyone will be dropping the links

                            Including me, cause why not?
                            Author: 4knnife
                            Title: Born In Blood
                            Genre: Romance Fiction
                            Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12522840205740905/Born-In-Blood
                            Synopsis:

                            A crow woke me up. Dazed, I realized that life indeed likes to repeat itself. Because I was reborn.

                            Left alone by all, she was sure her heart will never warm up again. When tortured for hours, she was confident her bland life was over. Who would expect that once collapsing in a pool of blood, she will wake up in a fluffy bedding from a long time ago.

                            IF YOU
                            a) are a person who wants a good ending, but when you get a good ending you're not satisfied cause you also want drama

                            b) are a person who wants a sad, heart-breaking ending that will leave you crying, but when you get a sad ending you aren't satisfied either, and secretly wishing for a good ending

                            c) want to sob/stare at the wall for half an hour and wonder what to do with your life after finishing the story

                            d) are a wandering reader who is lost

                            e) are just a bunch of awesomeness and pure curiosity

                            THEN, give this story a try


                            A/N: Make sure to prepare a truckload of patience, books to throw, walls to punch and a squishy stress ball.

                            P.S feels galore


                            minyol, do you have discord?

                              Hi, can I ask a review for 2 novels of mine? Thank you in advance :)

                              My 1st novel

                              Author: RanAml
                              Title: Serendipity Happens
                              Genre: Modern Romance
                              Synopsis:

                              A letter came to her out of the blue:

                              1st day: 'Hello, Miss. Do you have a name? Or can I call you mine?'

                              2nd day: 'Excuse me, I seem to have lost my phone number. Can I have yours?'

                              3rd day: 'Beautiful, do you have any raisins? No? Then, how about a date?'

                              Who would believe, the famous cold-as-ice President of internet giant Agnolo Holdings is a master at cheesy pick-up lines?!

                              . . .

                              Her name is Callaluna. Her parents left her in front of the orphanage when she was just a baby with a promise to take her back. But, they never came.

                              Until one day, the orphanage she lived in burned to ashes with no one survived. Except for her.

                              With nowhere to go, she wandered the street by herself trying to find a place she could call home once more. But, again, fate messed her life. She suddenly died in a car accident.

                              But, is it the end?

                              No.

                              For her, it's only the beginning.

                              And she would have never imagine she would, unexpectedly, find a love so wonderful.

                              Yes, serendipity really happens to her.

                              So, let it find you too.

                              Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/12524568106748305

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