I'd really appreciate any response! I'm writing this for my own personal reasons, but I'd love some critique so i can improve as a writer.
Author: Couchroach
Title: Craw
Genre: Magical Realism, Fantasy, Cultivation(?), Martial Arts
Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12818468006528805/CRAW
Synopsis: Born under the star of the crab, Rain is a Craw; considered by society to be weak, worthless, and only fit to be a servant because of one reason. Craw's are notoriously believed to be incapable of magic.
Orphaned, and impoverished Rain struggles to protect his sister who's been cursed and transformed into a black cat. Managing to join Odin's Fists: an organization of mercenaries sent out to complete high-risk tasks for equally high reward. Through determination and hard work, Rain has managed to fight equally against weak magicians and support his family.
However, prejudice is strong, and life is never static. Facing more and more struggles everyday Rain fights his own self-hatred and insecurities as much as he fights the world itself. Facing the dilemma of finding his own path in a world determined to force him down another.