Hello everyone, I am a new author that just started writing his first novel a few days ago. I could really use an honest review in order to improve my writing because English is my second language.
Author: Spajk
Title: Soul War: Journey to a new life
Genre: Fantasy
Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15057015306724005/Soul-War%3A-Journey-to-a-new-life

Synopsis
After the death of his wife Leon was never the same. He dedicated his life to his grandchildren, and spent the rest of his time mostly in seclusion, hiding his feelings and regrets from the rest of his family.

Now, he is given a chance to right a wrong, and meet his wife again, but the road will not be easy, bordering impossible.

Follow his magical journey, as he tries to overcome a plethora of mythical creatures, heroes and demons alike, as well as other souls in order to fulfill his heart’s only desire.

Thanks for checking it out!

    Hello guys, here is mine.
    Author: NEidarous.

    Title: The Infinite Duo: Bennu Effect.

    Genre: Fantasy.

    Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12018411706763805/The-Infinite-Duo%3A-Bennu-Effect

    Synopsis: "Time will always fix itself...no matter how much you try..."

    If you find yourself one day responsible to save everyone you love against the mightiest power of nature; Time, will you save them. Bennu Effect tells the story of Malika; a young doctor who one day finds herself responsible to save the lives of the closest people to her and learn the truth of her life and how that will change her forever.

      Author: Aysel Inara
      Title: Calla Lily, the exquisite symbol
      Genre: Fantasy Romance
      Link:
      https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14219914606744905?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4306309048

      Synopsis:

      Kingdom Bellezza is in panicked state as their core stone of beauty has turned to black, royal seers along with the citizens and the king himself are waiting for someone with mythical beauty to revive the stone, before the kingdom collapses. In between the scenario a girl gets teleported in the picture of kingdom, having pointy elf ears and snake-y green eyes, she is seen as the symbol of bad luck and curse.

      Would love blunt criticism ❤

        Hi Everyone! Looking for honest reviews and constructive criticism.

        Author: kazesenken
        Title: My attack stat is negligible, so I can't help but rely on critical attacks to succeed
        Genre: Fantasy
        Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/14734744205449505
        Synopsis:
        Claude Evers - transported into another world, familiar of Magic Knight Eryn. Attack - negligible, Magic - negligible, Crit - Max? With these unfortunate stats, the only option was to become the girl's servant. However, when enemies start falling to his trusty chef knife, Claude must do what he can to target only weak points. Easier said than done. As Claude and Eryn encounter all sorts of weird situations, Claude must use whatever seemingly random abilities to get by. What can a guy with such a messed up build hope to achieve?

          A Science Fantasy story with Kingdom Building :
          Magical Cosmic
          Genre : Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Science Fiction
          https://www.webnovel.com/book/15032211506636005/Magical-Cosmic
          Sypnosis :
          Victor Petard Asterisk was just an explorer, like many others.
          Roaming the unknown part of the galaxy and seeking the answer to Humanity's loneliness among the stars.
          One day, he chanced upon an unnatural wormhole that brings him to another Universe.
          A Universe, full of magic and wonders.
          "Hah!! With my advanced technology, who could challenge me?"
          "You there, savages! Still using bows and swords? Better go back to farming in the countryside!"
          "And you! What's with that backward magic staff? Change with mine instead."
          With determination and experience as an explorer, Victor will once more explore the world while discovering the deeper mystery of the Universe.
          Follow Victor's journey, as he makes changes across the world and had his name rang throughout the Multiverse.
          Welcoming to be reviewed.

            Name of the book: Innocent love of a deadly gangster

            Author: varsha_thakur
            Genre: Romance fiction, Action, War and Military fiction

            Sypnosis:
            A little girl loses her mother and is forced out of her home by her so-called father and his new wife. Her adopted sister also ignores her and then she finds the truth. To take her revenge she escapes in search of a better future.
            The mousy little girl returns after five years as a fierce one. No one knows about her transformation. She is covered in misteries that no one seems to be able to solve. She is protected by her obscure friends all the time.
            On coming back she is asked to marry, to humiliate her father she runs away only to be caught by her husband-to-be. She agrees to marry him just because of his promise to help her.
            Steve a leading industrialist and the no.1 richest man of his country kidnapped a girl from the leaving flight just because of his family. He is a deadly businessman and also the most wanted gangster of the underground.
            He finds his wife-to-be a mystery person and wants to be the only one to solve the mystery.
            What will happen when the two mysterious people cross each other? Will Steve be able to break through the barrier around Jessica? Will Jessica be able to open up to Steve and share her life and tell him her super mysterious identity that is...........?

            Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/14376679205146505/innocent-love-of-a-deadly-gangster

              Author: Springtofu
              Title: You Are My Colour Palette
              Genre: Romance
              Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12506244105672805/You-Are-My-Colour-Palette
              Synopsis: " When I'm ready, will you listen to me?"

              He look at the woman in front of him " I will wait as long as it takes just for you"

              Lee Jun Ting is an anti social king and also a sole heir to the Lee family, Zhou Qin Yang is smart, sharp tongue and friendly but comes from a poor family and has an abusive father. Somehow this two still get along with each other even with completely different world. To them, as long the presence for each other is enough for them to feel like home.

              7 years ago, she left him without a warning. He never got to tell his feelings nor did she manage to tell hers to him. They then met each other again. Watch Lee Jun Ting and Zhou Qin Yang unfold their feelings they kept for 7 years, and their struggles to be together.

                3 months later

                TITLE: Vengeance Upon Fate – Encounters of Tribulation

                AUTHOR: Hayato Shinohara (Myself)

                GENRE: Dark Fantasy

                LINK:

                https://m.webnovel.com/book/15773768606027705

                SYPNOSIS:

                Kurogane Tamashiro, an orphaned part time adventurer, wanders the city and passes his days doing small quests to earn himself just enough to survive. Cursing his fate since he was a child, he found no purpose to live for. The pleasantries of life such as befriending others were nothing more than a waste of time, only to lead him into yet another unfortunate event that would upset him.

                One fateful day while on a quest, he discovers an individual who may be tied with the person responsible for his mother’s tragic death. Upon losing the individual, he regains the resolve to find this person in order to seek the whereabouts of his mother's killer.

                With his life now taking sudden, drastic turns, he soon learns that his mother's death is only the tip of the iceberg, with far more happening than what seems apparent. So begins a journey of a young individual who will learn his very purpose of existence, while painfully carrying his dreadful past along the way.

                IMPORTANT NOTE:

                If you loved works such as Re:Zero, Rising of the Shield Hero and Danmachi, you'll definitely find this novel to your liking.

                Immerse yourself in a darker fantasy where you'll witness just how much a main character will suffer in order to accomplish his goal, even for something as generic as avenging a loved one.

                Expect lots of twists and alike, with a pinch of Romance, Comedy, Action, Adventure and Mystery!

                Hundreds of dollars was invested in this work, so your support will mean the world to me. <3

                  This is my third attempt in making a full-fledged story. It's currently on its third volume! And yeah, I hope this helps.
                  Title: The Doctor Of Death
                  Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15084062705728305
                  Genre: Military, Historical Fiction
                  Synopsis:
                  The time is the early 18th century and a plague struck Britain on its first week it killed more than thousands of people and time is running out for those who got infected by it they only get five days to live if they get infected...
                  A man who deemed himself as the enemy of the state dares to cure this mess once and for all.

                  Meanwhile, on the other side of Britain another force is messing with the balance on Britain and eating away Britain from the inside, what could Britain do in this situation?

                  "Death is upon us and were just standing right in front of it..."

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