Asphant Not at all. I'm cool with that. Thank for giving it a go.

I like your story, so as I've mentioned before I'll come back with some more feedback I hope will offer ideas. Probably won't be to weekend. Cheers.

      Asphant Done reviewing!

      Your novel/s (not sure, you have more than one novel in your novel :P) or stories, is very unique. I actually like it very much. You just need to work on your character development (which I also need to work on), grammar and extra details. Just keep on reading and in due time you would notice your improvements. That's all, and keep on writing.

      EDIT:
      It is also important to know the difference between in, at, and on, there are some instances where I suddenly furrow my brows because of that little mistake. I think I read something about "laying 'in' his bed." which is supposed to be 'on'.

          chonnie I wouldn't mind review swapping with you if that's ok? I'm somewhat new to writing on Webnovel and would really appreciate it. I'll leave my synopsis and link here, and if you're interested, just let me know.

          No One's Hero:
          Isaac was born to be the main character, and
          he knows it. Though, were it up to him, that would
          not be the case.
          He wants a quiet life. A normal life. For seventeen
          years Isaac has done everything he can to avoid
          the lead role.
          Supporting characters practically throw themselves
          head on into Isaac's path as he desperately tries to
          derail whatever Pilot Episode, Prologue, or Opening
          their "Chance Meeting" might result in.

          Isaac Gray might not be a bad guy,
          but he is certainly
          No One's Hero.

          https://www.webnovel.com/book/12643076006324705/No-One's-Hero

              chonnie Not yet! Still waiting for responses on the people tagged haha~
              Thanks for the review! Feedback points is noted for future chapters~
              I just read and left a review, too.

                  Asphant Hehe thanks! Your novels are on my reading queue. Oh for that 'in', 'at', and 'on'. I was on a jumbled state and would often forgot what I'm going to type next! Though.....thanks for pointing it out. And also thanks for the encouragement, I'll review your novels soon

                    J_Tyler Of course! I've added it to my library and will be posting the review by tonight or tomorrow by noon :))

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