Chryiss Okay, yours will be my first review....I will finish my mountain of laundry first, hahahaha

    Chryiss Done reviewing your novel, give you a 5 star because it's interesting novel and grammar is awesome better than mine! Keep it up!

        Lizabelle88 I also just finished yours and left a long review. It’s the first time I hit the character limit lol.

        Just as a precaution, I was very direct in my review about an issue that found distasteful. If you feel like my review wasn’t civil or informative enough in my reasoning, please let me know. I don’t wish to hurt anyone in my reviews, but as an honest reviewer, and I guess with strong morals living in the U.S., I had to discuss it. I do hope you can consider my suggestions deeply, but it’s ok, just take everything with a grain of salt. Please do keep on writing; you have good skills~

          Asphant Happy to do a review swap with you.

          Mine is To My Sunflower

          In particular, I'm looking for feedback on character design. You can read either Hinata or Eiji's POV. Read any amount of chapters is fine. I'll read yours tonight.

              Veronica8

              Done reviewing, extremely lucid work. Incredible.

              Edit:
              Not to berate your work. But BL is not my type of thing, so I have only read a few chapters then reviewed.

                  Sigheti I will review yours tomorrow, I added it already to my library...to make sure I wont forget it.

                    XOMatsumaeohana I will review yours later, I will inform you here after am done.

                    As of now am no longer doing review swap, am getting busier, XOMatsumaeohana novel will be the last am going to review. Thanks for the swap review guys, awesome to discover good stories comng from talented Authors like you! Thank you all! Good luck!

                        Asphant Not at all. I'm cool with that. Thank for giving it a go.

                        I like your story, so as I've mentioned before I'll come back with some more feedback I hope will offer ideas. Probably won't be to weekend. Cheers.

                            Asphant Done reviewing!

                            Your novel/s (not sure, you have more than one novel in your novel :P) or stories, is very unique. I actually like it very much. You just need to work on your character development (which I also need to work on), grammar and extra details. Just keep on reading and in due time you would notice your improvements. That's all, and keep on writing.

                            EDIT:
                            It is also important to know the difference between in, at, and on, there are some instances where I suddenly furrow my brows because of that little mistake. I think I read something about "laying 'in' his bed." which is supposed to be 'on'.

                                chonnie I wouldn't mind review swapping with you if that's ok? I'm somewhat new to writing on Webnovel and would really appreciate it. I'll leave my synopsis and link here, and if you're interested, just let me know.

                                No One's Hero:
                                Isaac was born to be the main character, and
                                he knows it. Though, were it up to him, that would
                                not be the case.
                                He wants a quiet life. A normal life. For seventeen
                                years Isaac has done everything he can to avoid
                                the lead role.
                                Supporting characters practically throw themselves
                                head on into Isaac's path as he desperately tries to
                                derail whatever Pilot Episode, Prologue, or Opening
                                their "Chance Meeting" might result in.

                                Isaac Gray might not be a bad guy,
                                but he is certainly
                                No One's Hero.

                                https://www.webnovel.com/book/12643076006324705/No-One's-Hero

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