If I agree to doing a proper review with you, I will like your post. And give you 1 or two comments in advance.

After you provide your review, I will complete mine.

    Sigheti I think she/he means a link to a review you did, rather than your novel.

      Oh no, I completely misunderstood, my apologies. I already reviewed forsaken123 novel. I didn’t mean to force you to read and review my work as well, I would understand if you refrained from doing so.

      If you are unhappy with the review I gave please tell me, I will delete it.

        Sigheti

        While this was not the depth, I was seeking you did make an effort.
        I will reflect this effort soon. Thanks for the review =].

        If possible, please remove your review. =]

        Acutelittletrap

        MisterE05 Hi I'd love to review your books, can you do mine.

        Also, if you leave a review, I'll reciprocate and leave one for you, just reply your link and tell me that your interested.

        Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13512655406123605/MAY

        Title: MAY.

        Synopsis: "May;" they call out her name.

        Laughs.

        "May, come back;"

        "May, is it true your the daughter of..."

        Silence

        May breathing heavily.

        Screams.

        Laughs.

          Sigheti Can I review yours as well, will you do mine.

          Also, if you leave a review, I'll reciprocate and leave one for you, just reply your link and tell me that your interested.

          Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13512655406123605/MAY

          Title: MAY.

          Synopsis: "May;" they call out her name.

          Laughs.

          "May, come back;"

          "May, is it true your the daughter of..."

          Silence

          May breathing heavily.

          Screams.

          Laughs.

            Acutelittletrap

            Queued up. You certain you want me to run six chapters? It's about a third of what's needed for a proper assessment of the three big ones. Unless you're running at over 2k per chapter you'll probably ditch one in order to get your story started.

            Waiting for a response before I go ahead since the low volume is likely to cost you a star or two.

              Acutelittletrap Probably both unfortunately. I don’t know many that I could call the kind of detailed reviewers you’re looking for on this site. I would suggest myself, but on the other site you didn’t want a review, so I left comments (as you know already).

              That reminds me, since you only asked for 11 chapters, you’re welcome to read/comment any 11 of mine. I forgot about clarifying that.

                StenDuring

                Go for it. =]

                If you are willing, tell me how you feel about the introspection. =]
                Also if you can please point out a few places I can add imagery.

                I went to give you your few comments, but because you have 3 novels. I did not one to pick one out randomly.

                Send the one you wish for me to review, and I will start reading it. I look forward to working with you.

                  Chryiss
                  I can do that for you =]
                  I did not want a review swap. =] Mostly because they are a waste of time.

                  Sighe made an effort.

                  And I think perhaps you and Sten are they only ones who read my post. =]

                    Acutelittletrap Webnovel, although other places too, have a lot of lurkers. They read but don't say anything~ I too lurked once, still do.

                      I can give you an honest and detailed review if you want it. In fact, I earn some dollars by reviewing books for an independent website, so... Although if you were more specific as to what you are looking for, that would help.

                      Chryiss I get you, bro. I already have a decent number of visits, but only a single miserable comment...

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