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To assure winning in both sides, i will review who ever reviews me.
Proper review swaps.
MisterE05 Hi I'd love to review your books, can you do mine.
Also, if you leave a review, I'll reciprocate and leave one for you, just reply your link and tell me that your interested.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13512655406123605/MAY
Title: MAY.
Synopsis: "May;" they call out her name.
Laughs.
"May, come back;"
"May, is it true your the daughter of..."
Silence
May breathing heavily.
Screams.
Laughs.
Sigheti Can I review yours as well, will you do mine.
Also, if you leave a review, I'll reciprocate and leave one for you, just reply your link and tell me that your interested.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13512655406123605/MAY
Title: MAY.
Synopsis: "May;" they call out her name.
Laughs.
"May, come back;"
"May, is it true your the daughter of..."
Silence
May breathing heavily.
Screams.
Laughs.
-_- The number of writers who clearly cannot read or do not desire to.
I could do a proper review, but I don't do copy/line -edits.
If you do something decent, I will repay your efforts. I do not do edits either those are comments I made.
Queued up. You certain you want me to run six chapters? It's about a third of what's needed for a proper assessment of the three big ones. Unless you're running at over 2k per chapter you'll probably ditch one in order to get your story started.
Waiting for a response before I go ahead since the low volume is likely to cost you a star or two.
Acutelittletrap Probably both unfortunately. I don’t know many that I could call the kind of detailed reviewers you’re looking for on this site. I would suggest myself, but on the other site you didn’t want a review, so I left comments (as you know already).
That reminds me, since you only asked for 11 chapters, you’re welcome to read/comment any 11 of mine. I forgot about clarifying that.
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Go for it. =]
If you are willing, tell me how you feel about the introspection. =]
Also if you can please point out a few places I can add imagery.
I went to give you your few comments, but because you have 3 novels. I did not one to pick one out randomly.
Send the one you wish for me to review, and I will start reading it. I look forward to working with you.
Chryiss
I can do that for you =]
I did not want a review swap. =] Mostly because they are a waste of time.
Sighe made an effort.
And I think perhaps you and Sten are they only ones who read my post. =]
Acutelittletrap Webnovel, although other places too, have a lot of lurkers. They read but don't say anything~ I too lurked once, still do.
I can give you an honest and detailed review if you want it. In fact, I earn some dollars by reviewing books for an independent website, so... Although if you were more specific as to what you are looking for, that would help.
Chryiss I get you, bro. I already have a decent number of visits, but only a single miserable comment...
A review or commentary like I did above would be awesome =].
If I am repeating a grammar mistake.
If and when I should add more imagery, and if I should, when would be the right time?
Also any good points so I can make sure to keep them in the future. =]
Anything that I cannot see or ask is often the best advice. Perhaps, the relationship between MC-FL is too cringe?
Perhaps I have too much introspection? Maybe my novel needs more action?
I need to expose myself to different viewpoints and see how my work presents itself.
Maybe it comes off as goofy when I want it to be serious etc.
Acutelittletrap hello there. I can do an honest review but it will take me sometime given I don't have too much of free time and also a book to write. So if you are patient enough, leave me your link. Thank you for your time.
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Done. Take note of my caveat.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12652502605368205/Transition-and-Restart
Btw, I don't expect a full 120 chapters read. That would be way too unbalanced.
Title:My Husband Is The Demon King
Melissa is the Hero and hope of the people who stands against the Demon King in the battlefield.
But wait...Why the Demon King came forward.
Marry me and i will end this war.
Is it love or just another trick of the Demon King.
What will our Hero do..
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Done with your review, enjoy!
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Superb!
Yeah, I'm writing for a teenaged audience and play it out as if my readers are book consumers of the old school and in their thirties or older. Most definitely an error on my part. There is a lot implied, and (taking your example of forty years old as an example) what she says is probably what an adult would say and expect another adult to understand the way you interpreted it. However, you're absolutely correct in assuming that might not be how a reader interprets it.
The extremely early "chapters" are piggybacked onto the story afterwards. The first version started straight and had my readers go WTF! when one school-kid was implied to really be an adult totally out of the blue. By now it's too late, but I have this feeling I probably should have started the entire story with that fifty year something old guy experiencing funny crap and staring at his fourteen year old body in another world in disbelief.
Thanks a lot for the input.
Title-Godfall
Genre-Fantasy
Tags-Comedy
Synopsis-The story of the beginning of an epic journey of me. A god.
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OK OK and ex-God but that's gonna change soon.
...........
Fine! Don't believe me. You'll see for yourself soon!
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Guys try this out please and it's short so it'll take 5 minutes. Leave a review with suggestions. Whoever reviews me I'll write a review for their work after reading exactly 2 chapters of their work. Leave a link in reply