Oh no, I completely misunderstood, my apologies. I already reviewed forsaken123 novel. I didn’t mean to force you to read and review my work as well, I would understand if you refrained from doing so.

If you are unhappy with the review I gave please tell me, I will delete it.

    Sigheti

    While this was not the depth, I was seeking you did make an effort.
    I will reflect this effort soon. Thanks for the review =].

    If possible, please remove your review. =]

    Acutelittletrap

    MisterE05 Hi I'd love to review your books, can you do mine.

    Also, if you leave a review, I'll reciprocate and leave one for you, just reply your link and tell me that your interested.

    Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13512655406123605/MAY

    Title: MAY.

    Synopsis: "May;" they call out her name.

    Laughs.

    "May, come back;"

    "May, is it true your the daughter of..."

    Silence

    May breathing heavily.

    Screams.

    Laughs.

      Sigheti Can I review yours as well, will you do mine.

      Also, if you leave a review, I'll reciprocate and leave one for you, just reply your link and tell me that your interested.

      Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13512655406123605/MAY

      Title: MAY.

      Synopsis: "May;" they call out her name.

      Laughs.

      "May, come back;"

      "May, is it true your the daughter of..."

      Silence

      May breathing heavily.

      Screams.

      Laughs.

        Acutelittletrap

        Queued up. You certain you want me to run six chapters? It's about a third of what's needed for a proper assessment of the three big ones. Unless you're running at over 2k per chapter you'll probably ditch one in order to get your story started.

        Waiting for a response before I go ahead since the low volume is likely to cost you a star or two.

          Acutelittletrap Probably both unfortunately. I don’t know many that I could call the kind of detailed reviewers you’re looking for on this site. I would suggest myself, but on the other site you didn’t want a review, so I left comments (as you know already).

          That reminds me, since you only asked for 11 chapters, you’re welcome to read/comment any 11 of mine. I forgot about clarifying that.

            StenDuring

            Go for it. =]

            If you are willing, tell me how you feel about the introspection. =]
            Also if you can please point out a few places I can add imagery.

            I went to give you your few comments, but because you have 3 novels. I did not one to pick one out randomly.

            Send the one you wish for me to review, and I will start reading it. I look forward to working with you.

              Chryiss
              I can do that for you =]
              I did not want a review swap. =] Mostly because they are a waste of time.

              Sighe made an effort.

              And I think perhaps you and Sten are they only ones who read my post. =]

                Acutelittletrap Webnovel, although other places too, have a lot of lurkers. They read but don't say anything~ I too lurked once, still do.

                  I can give you an honest and detailed review if you want it. In fact, I earn some dollars by reviewing books for an independent website, so... Although if you were more specific as to what you are looking for, that would help.

                  Chryiss I get you, bro. I already have a decent number of visits, but only a single miserable comment...

                    Ken_Raynous

                    A review or commentary like I did above would be awesome =].

                    If I am repeating a grammar mistake.
                    If and when I should add more imagery, and if I should, when would be the right time?
                    Also any good points so I can make sure to keep them in the future. =]

                    Anything that I cannot see or ask is often the best advice. Perhaps, the relationship between MC-FL is too cringe?

                    Perhaps I have too much introspection? Maybe my novel needs more action?

                    I need to expose myself to different viewpoints and see how my work presents itself.

                    Maybe it comes off as goofy when I want it to be serious etc.

                      Acutelittletrap hello there. I can do an honest review but it will take me sometime given I don't have too much of free time and also a book to write. So if you are patient enough, leave me your link. Thank you for your time.

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