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Blackturtle This is not a review swap thread. Go do that elsewhere.
Blackturtle This is not a review swap thread. Go do that elsewhere.
CCmei Hi! Thanks for your reply~ Yeah I was a irritated by the troll not gonna lie, thatβs why I wrote the reply in order to vent it out and get over it lol if I didnβt do that I would probs go to sleep thinking about it which, as both you and I know, is definitely not worth it for that sort of person.
Anyway! Looking forward to your review lol even though I have quite a lot of them it would be great to have some detailed criticism to improve even further in the future for the sake of my readers haha.
Cheers~
LBL
What deal?
Please don't post blatant self promotions and open review swap requests outside the set allowed threads. It's part of the forum rules.
You don't even need to read the post, you can see them in the titles.
Users are allowed to link their stories if the thread topic is relevant, Such as people recommending stories in appropriate request threads.
Better late than never. It's up, A Villainess's Struggles full review and breakdown is up. I got through the most recent chapter (61!) and left my nasty popcorn all over the paragraphs as I reacted and asked questions.
Somehow this may be my longest review yet at over 1k words. Sorry for the wall of text.
I really like the genre, and I root for your characters- there's just waaaaaay too many plotholes in here.
The stability is a free 5 stars. But don't get your hopes down, a round of editing or some time plot & character directing would greatly improve this story.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/14544383305710405/A-Villainess's-Struggles
Blackturtle okay
Blackturtle okay
Back to Necro my own thread- let the suffering continue.
LadyKCH
It has been 1000 years but the review for "Stardom Gone wrong" is finally up.
It's a pretty niche category with the Western Reality show concept, which I feel can still be made to work beautifully. But there would need to be more focus on the shows- and a lot more social media. I also felt the interaction wasn't appealing/natural- with this genre people often go for the Youtube approach when showing how people talk or get along. It balances and evens things out, so we don't just hav boring and random bulks, with a bit of "exciting" focus on the male interests.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/stardom-gone-wrong-(reader-x-yandere-males)_14885996705001605#review
Thanks for waiting.
CCmei Hello I would really appreciate it if you could give me your honest opinions and criticisms about my novel here is the link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/17464528305010905
Thank you and I don't mind if you could be harsh. I think that criticisms will make me grow as a writer since I'm new to this field once again thank you :)
Hi!
Ok, i really do want an honest review to improve, so if you can, please review my story: The Vulgar Mortal
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/17290755605240705
I do fear brutal honesty, but sometimes I need it to improve, so, slap me with the truth. I can take it, I hope.
Hello!
Hope this thread is still active. I'd really appreciate a look at my novel. Its still early days with only a few chapters but it would be great to know what things I need to fix before its too late.
Here is the link:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/17359722505529005
I want to hear your honest thoughts. I need good advice on what to improve and constructive criticism is the best way. Hopefully I wont cry too much afterwards T.T
Thank you!
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/16711946006065005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4303248177 -Mr. Zhang Hello.
This is my book. I welcome any reviews swaps and adds. Also honestly tell me what you think. Thank you.
I want to grow honestly so please feel free to tell me anything I need to work on. I'm scared though
Immortal_eve4
Switching the order up to stay fresh, though the queue is still going on.
The review for The Wicked Rose is up.
It's still very early in the story so not much to judge yet. I would most recommend to focus on character development and world. Since it's a modern world- isolate those elements.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-wicked-rose_17464528305010905#review
Haha, it's been many months. Still waiting for your review, lol. CCmei
No rush though. I just keep on doing what I have.
kazesenken
AHahaha, unlike the others I legitimately, have your story in my library to enjoy. Good work, I shall review when I catch up.
Hello, I have already published a little more than ten chapters and I plan to continue until I am satisfied. but obviously, I don't know what people who read it think about the story, I have no comments about it or more, I would like to read someone's sincere opinion about the work I am doing if you have time I invite you to read it.
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/16711946006065005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4303248177 -Mr. Zhang Hello.
This is my book. I welcome any reviews swaps and adds. Also honestly tell me what you think. Thank you.
I want to grow honestly so please feel free to tell me anything I need to work on. I'm scared though