CCmei
I honestly love long winded and constructive reviews (also because I tend to do this as well). I don't see a point in really short and all most kiss-uppy types of reviews that give the author no way to tell if what they are writing have actually have an impact/what they could improve upon. A good writer should be able to take criticism and use it to better their books. Not try and give a false advertisement of what their book really is by hiding the bad reviews.

I'll give my two books, feel free to review on either of them.

first one: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11799717406527805/book-3-Years-Later
it's about a girl struggling to fill in the gaps of her memory and having to cope with a decaying world. (I'm gonna be starting book 2 soon so I'd love your opinion on this on)

second one: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11237922105308805/Input-Log-Dates
A collection of stories about people trying to survive and make sense of what's happening to them. (much longer but you can start at any volume)

https://www.webnovel.com/book/14376214406229405/The-Soldier-Turned-Hero.

Synopsis
Colonel Shepherd was in the midst of a mission while He was covering the retreat of his comrades that's when he was hit by a stray bullet and died or He should have but he awakened in another world and the first sentence that he heard was "All Hail The Hero"!!
This is the story of a Soldier Turned Hero!

This is my first book and in fantasy genre any criticism will be highly appreciated
Thank You!

    Norah_Koch

    Wow you're a pretty productive writer!

    I just posted the review for the first link, which is your shortest and lastest novel "Supernatural Investigation 101: Chronicles of Nakashima Wakana."https://www.webnovel.com/book/15016935306579805/Supernatural-Investigation-101%3A-Chronicles-of-Nakashima-Wakana and will get to the rest as soon as I read a substantial amount to make a fair review.

    I put it under a 'spoiler' even though there are none to not impact your readers in any way. Thank you for allowing me to review honestly.

      CCmei Thank you for taking time to provide the honest constructive review that is going to help me improve I will work on the issues that you pointed out (_)

        CCmei I've noticed the summary's problem, but always thought that rewriting the prologue was more important. I've got some ideas for the prologue, but somehow always draw a blank on the summary which, in theory, should be easier.

        Anonymous978654321

        Well okay, that was a really short read so the review is up. I personally didn't like it but good luck.

          CCmei well seeing as getting my work dissected painfully will probably give me more pointers for how to improve my writing for future installments/stories than the 'reviews' from swaps that may not even read it, sure give me your worst.
          https://www.webnovel.com/book/14843435505807405/Kitsune---An-eventfull-time-abroad
          Short Synopsis: There were somethings Laura expected to happen during the first week of ehr exchange semester in Japan. Meeting new people, bureaucracy, getting lost on campus and a hike through the nearby japanese alps. which lead to the unexpected events of which meeting a talking Tanuki was just the very first.

            CCmei @Bnhhas341

            If you're just going to delete the review why did you bother asking me for one? Why waste people's time? I could have spent that time thinking a critical review and analysis to do some else's

            That's very petty of you and a reflection of you own character. I've noticed another reviewer was also deleted. Thus would not be an issue if you didn't promo and beg people to check out your work. If you are just going to delete all reviews that are not your spam accounts do not waste people's time.

            Update: wow the user deleted their own post.

              CCmei

              Truly, as an author, i font even know that we could delete review.

              There is one review that gave me three stars and only wrote 'will update the review after i read it'. I thanked him/her and told him/her to try it out then i leave it alone.

              Damnnnnnn, some people are oversensitive. If people say bad things about your story, that means your story lacked something.

              People/readers had wasted their precious time to tell you this so that u could change or improve your story to better one. Yet, some people couldnt take crictics.

              Sorry, just a rant after seeing many people rants about author deleting review and i got angry to the dishonest authors

              CCmei

              I just saw one of your review and is very impressed by how throughoutly you exained every aspect that was good and bad. You even gave advices and rating like B-.

              Make me want you to review mine but it is not a must. Just impressed by how detailed you are

                CCmei

                Well, probably because they want you to give them high ratings regardless of the quality of their story. Most of the time, that's usually what happens to review swaps. Writers giving each other high ratings. Like I'll give you a 5 so you also have to give me a 5 even tho your story and mine sucks big time. It's like they're just licking each others ass. 😒

                That's why I think review swaps are totally unreliable. Some don't even try to read the story and directly give it a high rating saying 'your story is good, blah... blah... blah... blah...' so the one they gave a high rating to would also give them one.

                I read one of the reviews you made. It's comprehensive and constructive. Definitely not something you would often see here in WN. So good job on that. 🖒 I hope your hard work won't get deleted again. If it does, just stop giving reviews. Because you're probably just wasting your time.

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