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If your prime demographic was guys I can def, see why. It would be like pushing them towards another RomCom at the playback movie theatre.

Even if it was aimed at a female audience, you clearly have the skills to make this so much better (and so much less boring). I've been through the bridesmaid and bachelor parties, this didn't make me laugh or sigh in good times or the emotional feelings underneath it. It made me groan and reminded me of all the phone calls I've ignored. See you can totally make us readers feel something, now make us feel other things too (like why are these girls even friends bc the MC just sounds miserable the whole time).

I know how those "I liked it " "pls update more" comments/review feel. Would love substance ^_*

No need for a review back or anything (I'd be in the review swaps sections if I was looking for that so it's all good). I'm just one opinion out of ...the internet- so take what's useful for you from my 'not review' and make it your own. Good luck.

ElianaG
Got yourself a deal. Review mine also.
Title: Hidden Edges

Want a quick and honest review swap? Well you got yourself a deal.

"Title": The Creation Stone: Victor King Mysteries.

"Link":
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/16949936106028005?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4311433903

"Tags": Mysteries, Reincarnation, Horror and Fantasy, System, Action, Adventure.

"Genres": Male lead( Fantasy male leading)

"Synopsis": The Creator assigned Benjamin to protect his saints. But they went missing.

Victor who is a wandering soul got Captured also along with the saints finds that there's more to creation than he ever knew.

He becomes the chosen one to steal the Creation Stone that doesn't appear to any man.

But rescuing Cannan made the journey a bit easier. after acquiring much knowledge and with the Creation Stone in his possession he rebell against the Authorities.
Now he is infected by an incurable physical abnormalities due to wrong use of the Stone.

You won't regret opening this book :)

CCmei Hi! Thanks for your reply~ Yeah I was a irritated by the troll not gonna lie, that’s why I wrote the reply in order to vent it out and get over it lol if I didn’t do that I would probs go to sleep thinking about it which, as both you and I know, is definitely not worth it for that sort of person.

Anyway! Looking forward to your review lol even though I have quite a lot of them it would be great to have some detailed criticism to improve even further in the future for the sake of my readers haha.

Cheers~
LBL

Blackturtle

What deal?

Please don't post blatant self promotions and open review swap requests outside the set allowed threads. It's part of the forum rules.
You don't even need to read the post, you can see them in the titles.

Users are allowed to link their stories if the thread topic is relevant, Such as people recommending stories in appropriate request threads.

Blackturtle okay

Blackturtle okay

Dee1 @CCmei I'll appreciate if I'm still able to get an honest review from you

Back to Necro my own thread- let the suffering continue.

LadyKCH
It has been 1000 years but the review for "Stardom Gone wrong" is finally up.
It's a pretty niche category with the Western Reality show concept, which I feel can still be made to work beautifully. But there would need to be more focus on the shows- and a lot more social media. I also felt the interaction wasn't appealing/natural- with this genre people often go for the Youtube approach when showing how people talk or get along. It balances and evens things out, so we don't just hav boring and random bulks, with a bit of "exciting" focus on the male interests.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/stardom-gone-wrong-(reader-x-yandere-males)_14885996705001605#review

Thanks for waiting.

CCmei Hello I would really appreciate it if you could give me your honest opinions and criticisms about my novel here is the link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/17464528305010905

Thank you and I don't mind if you could be harsh. I think that criticisms will make me grow as a writer since I'm new to this field once again thank you :)

Hi!

Ok, i really do want an honest review to improve, so if you can, please review my story: The Vulgar Mortal
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/17290755605240705

I do fear brutal honesty, but sometimes I need it to improve, so, slap me with the truth. I can take it, I hope.

Hello!
Hope this thread is still active. I'd really appreciate a look at my novel. Its still early days with only a few chapters but it would be great to know what things I need to fix before its too late.
Here is the link:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/17359722505529005

I want to hear your honest thoughts. I need good advice on what to improve and constructive criticism is the best way. Hopefully I wont cry too much afterwards T.T

Thank you!

Immortal_eve4
Switching the order up to stay fresh, though the queue is still going on.

The review for The Wicked Rose is up.
It's still very early in the story so not much to judge yet. I would most recommend to focus on character development and world. Since it's a modern world- isolate those elements.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-wicked-rose_17464528305010905#review

Haha, it's been many months. Still waiting for your review, lol. CCmei

No rush though. I just keep on doing what I have.