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Thank you for the encouragement! (Unloved Twin is updating later today! Castaway Isle - uh that one will be getting lots of updates this month. It's on a roll. They have long titles on this site but I honestly think of them with these shorter names. )

Reading other's works is a bit like doing a book report in school as a child. Some of them are not novels I would choose at first and I'm either pleasantly surprised and expand my horizons or I have a great appreciation for the books/novels I do like. It's fun to break out and try new things from time to time and does improve one's own wirting (even though it's hard to tell).

12 days later

CCmei Thanks for your review. I appreciate you, immortal. 😊

    7 months later

    CCmei Alright! I've stocked up on tissue paper since we don't have any toilet paper, so I'm ready for my glass heart to be broken!!

    My story is called World's First Demon Lord! Here's the link:

    https://www.webnovel.com/book/16238588506402605/World's-First-Demon-Lord

    And the synopsis:
    "This world is truly...boring."

    The Mage King, overthrown and killed by his own people, escaped via one last spell. Reincarnated in the body of a weak baby, he sets off to conquer the world once more.

    Except somehow, he has been reincarnated into a completely different world. A world with no mages...aside from him.

    What is the point in ruling such a boring world? He might as well reincarnate again. Until the TV catches his eye, and he sees a certain animation from a far east Asian country...

    Maybe...maybe I can do something here. Maybe in this world without mages, a mage is what is needed to spice things up a little. Maybe this boring world needs...a Demon Lord to rule it from the shadows.

    If this world isn't interesting enough, then I'll force it to change with my own hands!

    "A Demon Lord needs henchmen, so I will create my own!"

    "I also Heroes to fight against, so let's make those as well!"

    "Hmmmm...I like System novels, let's give a Hero a Gamer system!"

    "I also like superheroes and romances, let's create some superheroes and make them fall in love!"

    "What's this? A thriller? Hmmm...maybe I can make something like this too..."


    Feel free to stop by any time!

      CCmei Seeing that it's a productive thread, I won't lock it for now. :) Tell me if you need it locked anytime soon, though.

        So, posting link here is allowed or not ?

        Forum says review outside monthly review thread is prohibited, so I am just wondering is it okay to post my novel links here ?

          NoWoRRyMaN
          Those are for review swaps I believe. Since this is a pretty one way thing with just me giving out reviews, as long you're not actively/shamelessly promoting your novel in the thread then it's fine. A link with a request is fine.

          (Warning though- I will review seriously and honestly. You can search up to the other reviews I already did in done replies for a sample if you wish.)

          yaoyueyi

          bows to the great Yuebot

          Many thanks. I am not worthy but shall beseech you when the time comes before my puny human body drowns.

          CCmei
          It was really help, like a lot.❤ I'll follow the points and I'm glad someone did a detail review, pointing out many things. (T _T) I can see how much wotk it needs, haha. After staying on WN around 8 months now I can find the odd things and lackings.😃 Thank you very much.

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