The_Canary That's good to hear! :)

If you need new sources of ideas, I highly suggest pouring over a couple of interesting stories that is similar to genre that your story can relate. Since your story is a fantasy-adventure that has the setting in a school, I highly suggest the ones with the same genres as well. Like... RWBY or Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei.

The second one is very good in my opinion. In fact, some elements of my story from that LN (and anime) comes from that, it got magic, action, and the setting is also in a school. So you might want to look into it! ;)

Also, think about what kind of audience you are targeting. Are you targeting readers that are more into regular xianxia stories, who needs a quick fix? Or readers that are more into western fantasy?

Obviously, I'm of the latter since I'm a fan of western fantasy. That's why my chapters are long and detailed. It was simply done on purpose. I hope these tips and advice will be of help to you in the future, despite that it comes from someone who is also new in the writing world... (_')

      Regius_Sanguis I'm a fan of RWBY (love this one!) and read the LN series of Mahouka Koukou Rettousei (but I got dizzy on the jargons and complex magic system in that world).

      For the readers, I'm actually don't know yet. :( Huhuhu. Can I just say anyone who's interested in young adult fantasy (skewed more on Anime fans) hahaha. Anyways, these are the things I need to figure out. :)

          The_Canary Who didn't got doozy by the magical jargon and complex system of that LN MKR?

          It's even more complicated than that of Fate series' (-_-')

          Anyways, good luck with the readers. You're gonna find a lot of them in here.

          I, for one, am a fan of the genre, but due to the amount of animes that were released (more like, unleashed) these days, and how they turn out in the end.

          It's simply became a downer when too many of them turn out typical and dull, like an over-chewed gum (-__-)

          That's why I simply divert most of my attention on western fantasy and animes with good plots, to keep myself motivated and thinking about new ideas. Listening to music while I'm writing my story helps me a lot as well. It's very relaxing when you which direction you're going... (_)

              glaurunglives Haha, yo G! We're just talking. You know, bonding, making friends. The works! :D

              How are you today, my friend? :)

                  glaurunglives sorry I was taking my time reading your story from the start. :(
                  So I skipped on Chapter 51! Done posting my review also :)

                  Now I'm curious on that staff! I'll go back reading from previous chapters hehehe.

                      Regius_Sanguis
                      Sure, that's ok. I hope you enjoy it. It's fine even if you lose the urge to review, as I care more about what people think and what they like/dislike, so be sure to leave me comments.

                      I'll take a look at yours. Seems like a FF15/anime hybrid fanfic?

                          kazesenken

                          Yup. I made a decision to go against the norm of fan-fiction. Like creating my own MC and putting him in a different world.

                          He's going to be OP in future, and be warned. I made the chapter long because I stylized it after western fantasy novrls. So, heads up.

                              Content - in my opinion 4-5 stars.

                              Text - from 3 stars. Bad English, grammatical errors.

                              Pros, thanks to the advice of the reviewer, he began to use the humor thesaurus, it seems the text has come to life a little. Before pouring chapters, double-check once. This is the text.

                              In content, new methods, knowing where to look for treasures are interesting.

                              I need advice on improving the novel.

                              Read chapters 1 through 4. Iā€™m rewriting it now, I began to rewrite chapter 5. It has already taken 7 hours. Still need at least 2 hours.

                              If I did not give you a review, then I will write, if I did, I can write 5-6 comments on the chapters.

                              my romance - https://www.webnovel.com/book/15195393805364505/The-Adventures-of-Treasure-Hunters

                                Regius_Sanguis

                                As I said before, don't be rushed to leave a review (you don't actually have to leave one if you don't want to). I would rather you take your time and enjoy the story and let me know your thoughts.

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