KageMugen

hello my name is Brandon Gould and i am the writter of the Tylingariea Epic if you are able to i will give you a review for your book if you could read mine and give it a review as well as tell as many pepole about it as possible. i hope you like it. i have been working on it for eight years now and i think it is going ok. i already know that the grammer is bad.

      http://m.webnovel.com/book/16902667706822005

      No synopsis yet...

      This story is about Earth getting merged with Hell and people transforming into superpowered zombie things...

      I'll change the synopsis in the future.
      I want you guys to think of a title fitting for the story and because my naming sense is idiotic I want you guys to help me think up a name...

      I'm a newbie so I'll always be reading comments to know if there's something to improve the novel like wrong grammars and spelling. So don't hold back and start leaving hate comments.

      Joke, don't hate me please.

      I posted this story right now because I want other people's opinion to improve the story. I will be remaking this in the future after improving it.

      And thank you.

        ThePotatoKing I'll be interested in a review swap, will read later today. My story is called World's First Demon Lord; if you need a link, let me know!

            ThePotatoKing I'll be interested in a review swap, will read later today. My story is called World's First Demon Lord; if you need a link, let me know!

                Synopsis:

                The Heavenly Dao exists.

                It decides what is right and what is wrong. To act against it is to sin, to act according to it is to be blessed by its graces.

                The world of cultivation is difficult, an unchanging principle. Yet there are those who are cherished by the Heavens, cuddled into rising above all and everyone else. How can this be? Why must this be?

                What is moral and just? What is evil and immoral?!

                WHY DOES IT GET TO DECIDE?!

                So we, the Sinners, we act against the Heavenly Daos, grasp our own fates in hopes of truly overturning them.

                This is a Journey of a young boy born Blessed, but turned Sinner.

                The greatest sinner of them all.

                https://www.webnovel.com/book/16856682305508105/Paragon-of-Sin

                  yizreel_jez done with yours bzw you really need to write more before asking for review swap...
                  2 chapters of one which is just an info dump and the other one is half a chapters worth is too little...

                      3417 sure... will try my best.... but can you provide the work link?

                          Would love to get into a few swaps . I’m not sure about the correct way to post my novel.
                          It’s called magical ties

                            3417 uh, i don't think we're allowed to see the inkstone edit page. i can click on the link but then i get my own inkstone webpage. i think you actually have to post it for others to be able to see it/review it :d

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