GorujoKun I understand you, my friend.
But, for me, my creations are created deep inside my heart.
Sharing it to others are merely joining you to your protagonist's journey.
Views, Comment, power stone are only worldly possession.
Whether it's famed or not. Creating a story is not just for it to become a famous story, rather it's to enjoy and dedicate yourself to your passion.
To be honest, I check your story and I didn't find problems with it and the grammar was good than mine.
So, you should continue writing, until you really like to make a wonderful novel. Planning is also essential for a good novel. (Although some are also good at writing without planning)