Veronica8 
yep.. sorry bout that!!
(っ˘з(˘⌣˘ ) here's a kiss to make up. I like to get in the moments first before knowing what i'm doing. It might put some readers off, but yeah!! I'm working hard to improve myself as the time goes by.ᕙ(⇀‸↼‶)ᕗ
AI380 It is an improvement!!! It looks good in my opinion.
But, I think your drawing looks empty in the background. You could added something like a throne room or the vast land and sky.(If you want to) Use first person of view to draw the background.
Starting from the characters, as the background getting farther, everything will look small. It make the space around the characters looks bigger.
The cat's face can also be refined more. But, anything else is good. The colouring, their interaction and their clothes design.
Carciphones_02 I have adjusted the cat face, right now I'm not sure what to add in the background.
Carciphones_02 oops. Sorry I wasn't directing comment to you. Just a general observation.
Cause I've read stories where the writer is free forming. Still a great story, but also leaves me confused. To a story that follows a structure.
Veronica8 No, no!! It's me who should be Sorry. I read it again and realized I'm the one who misunderstanding your meaning!!⟵(๑¯◡¯๑)
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To be honest, I do not expect to get so many responses in this thread 
AI380 we're all
in this together!!(high school musical reference)
Tomoyuki or my posts just rub you off the wrong way?
Mostly this..
Like in this thread. Judging from past experiences, I simply doubted your claim on not caring about criticism.(Was I being Nasty? A bit. Do I target you in particular? Nope, you just happen to post plenty of things that I find inconsistent)
Yet you, instead of saying something along the lines of “Past is past, I’m now a Tomo that doesn’t care after all that I’ve experienced.” decided to get all defensive with sarcasm.
Now when do people get defensive, I wonder?
P.S. Not to mention that your sarcasm is a bit over the top... All I said is “Really now?” and suddenly we’re on the topic of deleting your novel.. Quite honestly, my reaction was literally “???”
Guys. I understand you have your differences, but let's not turn this thread into a verbal match. Last thing we want is to give Yue-bot a reason to lock this thread.
Let's respect the OP here, and their intentions for this thread. There's been some great advice and personal experiences shared. If we keep it objective, all is cool.
tigre900 Create a novel so good that your review section gets filled with 1 stars after you delete it out of nowhere.
Now let's not get this thread locked by yue please!
GorujoKun I understand you, my friend.
But, for me, my creations are created deep inside my heart.
Sharing it to others are merely joining you to your protagonist's journey.
Views, Comment, power stone are only worldly possession.
Whether it's famed or not. Creating a story is not just for it to become a famous story, rather it's to enjoy and dedicate yourself to your passion.
To be honest, I check your story and I didn't find problems with it and the grammar was good than mine.
So, you should continue writing, until you really like to make a wonderful novel. Planning is also essential for a good novel. (Although some are also good at writing without planning)
RABBITICOL Even to write it that way takes talent. The guy didn’t have to read it. There was something that compelled him to. It’s like the character in Misery when the author killed off her favorite character.
HonestReviewer Oh thank you!
Yeah I get it, some people want to write just for fun and some people want to write just for the positive fame, and i completely understand them and they should do what's appropriate whenever it's one approach or the other.
And about that, yes I did grammar and spelling lookup before I submitted, it is much more efficient than having to look again at the novel so yeah...
Pleasedeteme An HDsoundI subscriber, how amazing, I have a full playlist for chill/relaxing songs, which I have about 90+ songs coming out of this channel
Pleasedeteme Why should I be worried about them not going? Where should they go? 
If they stay here forever won’t that be an imprint of myself left behind when I die? Isn’t that the point?
AI380 Hey I'm not sure if this will help at all, but I think that the synopsis you have written could probably be attributed to lower views. It's really long, like a bit too long. If after the first paragraph I'm not hooked, I just won't want to read the book. Fine tune the synopsis and then see if you get more views, hope I'm of help!
Pleasedeteme stop picking a fight dear lord!!! You are embarrassing your subject, my lord!!!
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GorujoKun some people want to write just for fun and some people want to write just for the positive fame,
Probably I'm doing it for both. I continue writing it because I love my story and all the characters I created, but I will write at my own pace for fun, but if suddenly I found that there are people who like my story, I'll write more, probably a chapter a day instead of two chapters a week.
DuskArcanist
I thought about that as well, I've changed my cover page yesterday, now it's time for synopsis.
