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AI380 It is an improvement!!! It looks good in my opinion.

But, I think your drawing looks empty in the background. You could added something like a throne room or the vast land and sky.(If you want to) Use first person of view to draw the background.

Starting from the characters, as the background getting farther, everything will look small. It make the space around the characters looks bigger.

The cat's face can also be refined more. But, anything else is good. The colouring, their interaction and their clothes design.

Carciphones_02 I have adjusted the cat face, right now I'm not sure what to add in the background.

Carciphones_02 oops. Sorry I wasn't directing comment to you. Just a general observation.

Cause I've read stories where the writer is free forming. Still a great story, but also leaves me confused. To a story that follows a structure.

Veronica8 No, no!! It's me who should be Sorry. I read it again and realized I'm the one who misunderstanding your meaning!!⟵(๑¯◡¯๑)

:grin:

To be honest, I do not expect to get so many responses in this thread

AI380 we're all in this together!!(high school musical reference)

Sythcake Tomoyuki

Guys. I understand you have your differences, but let's not turn this thread into a verbal match. Last thing we want is to give Yue-bot a reason to lock this thread.

Let's respect the OP here, and their intentions for this thread. There's been some great advice and personal experiences shared. If we keep it objective, all is cool.

Tomoyuki Hell no. I wanna write a novel to make someone rage as hard as that last loser Hahahaha

tigre900 Create a novel so good that your review section gets filled with 1 stars after you delete it out of nowhere.

Now let's not get this thread locked by yue please!

GorujoKun I understand you, my friend.

But, for me, my creations are created deep inside my heart.

Sharing it to others are merely joining you to your protagonist's journey.

Views, Comment, power stone are only worldly possession.

Whether it's famed or not. Creating a story is not just for it to become a famous story, rather it's to enjoy and dedicate yourself to your passion.

To be honest, I check your story and I didn't find problems with it and the grammar was good than mine.

So, you should continue writing, until you really like to make a wonderful novel. Planning is also essential for a good novel. (Although some are also good at writing without planning)

RABBITICOL Even to write it that way takes talent. The guy didn’t have to read it. There was something that compelled him to. It’s like the character in Misery when the author killed off her favorite character.

HonestReviewer Oh thank you!
Yeah I get it, some people want to write just for fun and some people want to write just for the positive fame, and i completely understand them and they should do what's appropriate whenever it's one approach or the other.
And about that, yes I did grammar and spelling lookup before I submitted, it is much more efficient than having to look again at the novel so yeah...

Pleasedeteme Why should I be worried about them not going? Where should they go? If they stay here forever won’t that be an imprint of myself left behind when I die? Isn’t that the point?

AI380 Hey I'm not sure if this will help at all, but I think that the synopsis you have written could probably be attributed to lower views. It's really long, like a bit too long. If after the first paragraph I'm not hooked, I just won't want to read the book. Fine tune the synopsis and then see if you get more views, hope I'm of help!