daudas155
Hi I'm Bcrowhunt an author
I have two works
One of them is an old one which I put on a hiatus because I honestly kept churning out chapters until 300 but I stopped because one I felt like the story had to many elements which I couldn't quite keep track off and I couldn't organize, this also stopped me because I wasn't sure what lane I wanted to push forward in.
I've taken some time fixing it up here and there but it's just stalled it for too long now
Another one I recently started, it's a lot cleaner and I really feel passionate for it too, but I like both my works and I'd like to improve and continue them.

Title: #The Journeyman's New Journey

Genre: #Fantasy Romance

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Synopsis:
A Journeyman in the boxing ring goes back in time to when he's a child, but he finds that the world he's in this time isn't exactly the same as the one he left and maybe his skills won't be as useful this time around.

Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/17311726705332405/The-Journeyman's-New-Journey

Title: #Tear A Path

Genre: #Fantasy, End of the World

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Synopsis: The earth explodes in size, bringing with it great beauty and monstrosities. Wang Zhao Hui, a man singled out by the great cataclysm forges a road towards what he lost as the only trapper with a broken system (as in it doesn’t work

Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/10835168805183105

      It's a big one but I really need some feedback and help

        I am an editor/proofreader. My rates are a little high, but I can edit as much as 5000 words per day. Contact me if you are interested.

          Hello guys, I have taken up editing recently and will help out authors who have just begun their journey with writing. I have experience in writing and editing, mainly under fantasy, sci-fi, action and adventure genres. If anyone needs an editor, let me know. We can talk further about it on discord.

          Detective [One_chance]#3687 - discord id.

            a month later

            Nou It's very good at explaining the types of editing!

                I would like an editor. I'm writing a fantasy called "Mages of the North" and about to finish my first volume. It's a rare mixture of magic being used during the 17-18th century, which means a pre-American Revolution sort of time period.

                If anyone's interested, let's talk.

                • Nou replied to this.

                  Dalton_Reutlinger

                  First, figure out what type of editing you need: Copy, line, mechanical, substantive, developmental, manuscript, etc. Hopefully, its not editing you need, but simple proofreading.

                  Second, go over your own work. Look at things more from a substantive editing point of view. Especially chapter 1. If I have to power my way through chapter 1 to get to the good stuff, that story will likely be dropped. If your chapter 1 isn't that good, you may have to rewrite a lot of your beginning/early chapter to get a good starting chapter 1. And even if we ignore the rampant witch hunts in the 17th-ish century, promises of a "rare" combination of "magic" and "17th-18th century" isn't enough to get me to power through a horrible start. Make sure you're building suspense properly, and going straight into [an] action.

                  Third, use a grammar/spell checker.

                  If you think you did all that, feel free to ping me with your chapter 1, 2, and/or 3.

                      4 days later

                      Hi! I need an editor, if anyone interested contact my discord _Sha#0285

                      for grammar, typos and punctuation

                      Nou you seemed one of the editor?
                      or you are not?

                          Please check my book first and tell me what you think of it.
                          Then further discussion will take place in the future.

                            Nou sorry for my low iq, but can you pls explain what is copy, line, mechanical, substantive, and those other things?

                                Anyone in need of an editor? Message me your discord, I'll add you there and we'll talk.

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